[Cloud] Oki Data has reviewed the Print Job Ticket and Associated Capabilities specification and has comments

[Cloud] Oki Data has reviewed the Print Job Ticket and Associated Capabilities specification and has comments

[Cloud] Oki Data has reviewed the Print Job Ticket and Associated Capabilities specification and has comments

Nancy.Chen at okidata.com Nancy.Chen at okidata.com
Mon Feb 27 17:44:04 UTC 2012


Hi Pete,

I have no further comments for the version 20120117 in addition to those 
posted already.

Here are the comments against the new updated version (20120227) today:

Line 373-376 - It's not clear "a protocol" here is what protocol.  Readers 
need to do a lot of guessing here.  It's any printing protocol? Or only a 
protocol for cloud printing?

Line 360 - Please also reference the section number in RFC291 here  - much 
easier for readers not familiar with IPP to find.

Line 413 - Figure 7 caption still labels this element as "InsertSheet 
Datatype".  Same problem with Figures 9 -12, and Figures 15, 17-23.

Line 521 - It's not clear "that element" here means the PageRanges 
PrintJobTicket element or a vendor extension that controls this feature. 
Please reword.

Thanks,
-Nancy
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Solutions and Technology
Services and Solution Business - US
Oki Data
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054
Phone: (856)222-7006
Email: Nancy.Chen at okidata.com

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