[IDS] Apple has reviewed the PWG-Log specification and has comments

[IDS] Apple has reviewed the PWG-Log specification and has comments

[IDS] Apple has reviewed the PWG-Log specification and has comments

Michael Sweet msweet at apple.com
Fri Jan 11 17:51:19 UTC 2013


[Revised w/comments]

Global: Use document title references instead of RFC references.

Section 1: Add best practice is to use TLS/RFC 5425 when transmitting log information.

Page 16, right before Section 5: Remove blank page

Section 5.1.8: The list of user roles should be alphabetized.

Section 9: Add best practice is to use TLS/RFC 5425 when transmitting log information, per section 6 item 3 conformance requirement.

Section 9: Missing references to Transport Layer Security (TLS) Transport Mapping for Syslog [RFC5425], Transmission of Syslog Messages over UDP [RFC5426], Datagram Transport Layer Security Version 1.2 [RFC6347], and Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS) Transport Mapping for Syslog

Section 10.1: Missing references to Datagram Transport Layer Security Version 1.2 [RFC6347] and Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS) Transport Mapping for Syslog

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Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair


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