IPP> IPP Internet-Draft

IPP> IPP Internet-Draft

IPP> IPP Internet-Draft

Robert Herriot robert.herriot at Eng.Sun.COM
Mon Nov 25 21:39:19 EST 1996


Great Job Scott!


I found a few typos:


MS Word thinks that 'implementor' should be changed to 'implementer'.


in the table above line 928, it says


    ... is r
    are returned:eturned.


The word returned is split and duplicated


A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:


    For each J
    position-in-list. ob URL ...


The word Job seems to have been split.


A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:


    ... and
    andposition


An extra 'and'


A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:


    change 'and end user' to 'an end user'


A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:
    ... inter
    esponse,spersed.


Delete 'esponse'.


Above line 969 in type2Enum cell: change 'cancan' to 'can', change
  'TBDbyvalues' to 'values', change 'anytimereviewed' to 'reviewed',
   change 'approvaal' to 'approval'


A couple of lines further down in the next table cell:


   change 'namvalues' to 'values'.


line 1071: in table cell for processing:
    fix 'enginthe'. I not sure what should be here.


line 1993: change 'atttribute' to 'attribute'



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