Looks good.
1. Slide 4: change "final draft" to "final standard text"
2. Please also post a black and white .pdf (two-up) so people can print.
3. Slide 5, add / after ipp in the URL.
4. Slide 20, typo: implemented
5. Slide 22, add the web address
6. Slide 23, typo: Query
Tom and Carl-Uno