IPP> MOD more editorial comments

IPP> MOD more editorial comments

IPP> MOD more editorial comments

Ron Bergman rbergma at dpc.com
Thu Dec 18 21:20:52 EST 1997


Scott,


Sorry these are so late.  (You may have caught these already.)


1. section 2.4, the first line of the text reads "...Job objects be..."
   should this read "...Job objects SHALL be.." (or SHOULD, MUST, etc)


2. section 4.4.19 reads "...the printer is currently accepting jobs..."
   should be "...the printer is currently able to accept jobs..."
   This is a boolean and false indicates the printer is rejecting jobs.


3. section 5.4, seecond paragraph, third line.  The sentence ends with two
   periods.






	Ron Bergman
	Dataproducts Corp.



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