Done!
I know I keep promising new updates and then delaying. I've already edited a bunch of things since the recent revision I've posted and I'm trying to maintain momentum to get another revision available by early next week.
Smith
On 2013-09-24, at 10:08 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com>
wrote:
> Hi Smith,
>> The document title word order should be changed from:
>> "IPP/2.0 Implementer’s Guide"
> - which implies that it applies ONLY to IPP/2.0 protocol version
>> to:
>> "IPP Implementor’s Guide v2.0"
> - which implies that it spans all IPP protocol versions and updates
> the previous RFC 3196
> - note that the final syllable should be spelled w/ an 'o' rather than
> the incorrect 'e' (notwithstanding MS Word's illiterate dictionary)
> to match the title of RFC 3196
>> Also, the abstract says it's for IPP/2.0 which is NOT correct (it
> also applies to IPP/1.1, IPP/2.1 and IPP/2.2 protocol versions).
> Should change from:
>> "This document updates and extends RFC 3196 for IPP/2.0."
>> to:
>> "This document updates and extends RFC 3196 for all IPP protocol
> versions."
>> Cheers,
> - Ira
>>> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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