Hi,
Based on IETF Apps Area review by Alexey Melnikov.
I've just posted a new draft of LDAP Schema for Printer Services to:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ldap-printer-schema-06-20140303.txt
- plaintext Internet-Draft format (warning - contains explicit formfeed
characters)
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ldap-printer-schema-06-20140303.pdf
- line numbered PDF of plaintext - use this version for review, please
This document *will be* submitted to the IETF I-D repository tomorrow,
when the I-D submission blackout for IETF 89 ends. Minor typos from
the I-D Nits tool may be corrected tomorrow morning (in the PWG FTP
repository versions as well).
This document was created by revising the original LDAP Schema for
Printer Services [RFC3712].
Cheers,
- Ira
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Change History
3 March 2014 - draft-mcdonald-ldap-printer-schema-06.txt
Seventh draft - for IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG
Global - updated publication and expiration dates in copyright,
header, footer, and boilerplate.
Global - replaced 'SHOULD not' w/ 'SHOULD NOT' for RFC 2911
compliance, per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - revised Abstract and section 1 Introduction to clarify
that this document is an individual submission to the IETF by the IPP
WG of the IEEE-ISTO PWG, per Tom Petch and IPP WG review.
Editorial - revised Abstract and section 1 Introduction to clarify
that this document obsoletes [RFC3712], per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - added section 1.1 'Relationship to SLP Printer Service'
and section 1.2 'Source of LDAP Printer Attributes' for clarity.
Editorial - added section 1.3 'Sources of LDAP Printer Schema OIDs'
to describe permanent delegation of "1.3.18.0.2.24.46" to the
IEEE-ISTO PWG by IBM in October 2011, per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - added section 1.4 'Rationale for Design Choices' for
clarity.
Editorial - revised sections 3.1, 3.4, 3.5, and 3.6 to delete
erroneous SHOULD references to structural classes, per Alexey
Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4 to clarify reference to section 4 of
[RFC4517] and forward reference to section 6 of LDAP Printer Schema,
per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4 to add implementation note about
compatibility with existing implementations of [RFC3712] and
underlying string length limits in [RFC2707], [RFC2911], [RFC3805],
[PWG5107.2], [PWG5100.13], and [PWG5100.14], per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4.4 to change SHOULD to MUST for
conformance to [BCP47] for natural language tags, per Alexey
Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4.4 printer-natural-language-configured
and section 4.13 printer-generated-natural-language-supported
definitions to clarify that they refer to LDAP Printer in syntax
DirectoryString (UTF-8), per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4.11 printer-charset-configured and
section 4.12 printer-charset-supported definitions to clarify that
they refer to IPP protocol values and that corresponding LDAP Printer
attributes are always in syntax DirectoryString (UTF-8), per Alexey
Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4.20 printer-number-up-supported and
section 4.35 printer-device-id definitions to add missing
SINGLE-VALUE clause, per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4.35 printer-device-id to delete
confusing and redundant note about ordering of key/value pairs within
LDAP attribute values (since this is clearly explained in
[PWG5107.2]), per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - revised section 4 syntaxes of printer-uri,
printer-xri-supported, printer-name,
printer-natural-language-configured, printer-location, printer-info,
printer-more-info, printer-make-and-model,
printer-ipp-versions-supported, printer-charset-configured,
printer-charset-supported,
printer-generated-natural-language-supported,
printer-document-format-supported, printer-compression-supported,
printer-finishings-supported, printer-sides-supported,
printer-media-supported, printer-media-local-supported,
printer-resolution-supported, printer-current-operator,
printer-service-person, printer-delivery-orientation-supported,
printer-stacking-order-supported, printer-output-features-supported,
printer-aliases, printer-device-id, printer-uuid,
printer-charge-info, printer-charge-info-uri, printer-geo-location,
printer-ipp-features-supported, to remove length restrictions in
syntax and add textual notes instead about IPP compatibility (where
applicable), per Alexey Melnikov.
Editorial - added appendix A 'Changes since RFC 3712', per Alexey
Melnikov.
Editorial - added missing informative reference to [RFC3712].
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