[IPP] HP has reviewed the IPP Version 2.0, 2.1, and 2.2 specification and has comments

[IPP] HP has reviewed the IPP Version 2.0, 2.1, and 2.2 specification and has comments

[IPP] HP has reviewed the IPP Version 2.0, 2.1, and 2.2 specification and has comments

Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect) smith.kennedy at hp.com
Fri Aug 28 20:06:16 UTC 2015


Greetings,

Sorry I didn't get this feedback until now:

Page 10, Line 244: The IPP Document object should also be mentioned

Page 33, Line 547: Reference for "The IPP/1.1 specification" should be to RFC 2910, not 2911?

Page 33, Line 570: "according to the defined procedures" -> "according to the procedures defined therein"

Page 34, Line 581-583: Seems a little unclear without more description or references to where there would be more detail

Page 35, Line 596-598: These and any reference links to 5100.12 are basically self-referential and will need to be updated when this document gets finally ratified, as an editorial housekeeping step, right?

Cheers,
Smith

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    Smith Kennedy
    Wireless Architect - Client Software - IPG-PPS
    Standards - PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum
    HP Inc.
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