[IPP] HP Inc. has reviewed the IPP 3D specification and has comments

[IPP] HP Inc. has reviewed the IPP 3D specification and has comments

[IPP] HP Inc. has reviewed the IPP 3D specification and has comments

Ira McDonald blueroofmusic at gmail.com
Thu Dec 8 16:53:54 UTC 2016


Hi,

FWIW - I second Mike's comments about internal links.  For the IPP
System Service, this would affect several hundred references.

Cheers,
- Ira


Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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On Thu, Dec 8, 2016 at 11:29 AM, Michael Sweet <msweet at apple.com> wrote:

> Smith,
>
> Thanks for your feedback.  Looking through the comments, I'm not sure how
> to (simply, easily) resolve #5 - Word's support for internal hyperlinks is
> poor, and trying to get it to select only the bracketed name ("[FOO]") in
> the 79 places I'd need to do this isn't something I want to do unless
> people see this as necessary.  For the record, in the history of the PWG I
> think your implementor's guide is the only specification we have ever
> produced that had such internal links...
>
>
> On Dec 7, 2016, at 5:02 PM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect) <
> smith.kennedy at hp.com> wrote:
>
> Greetings,
>
> Here are a number of points of feedback on the IPP 3D Printing extensions
> draft in PWG Last Call (http://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/
> ipp/wd/wd-ipp3d10-20161114.pdf) - apologies that I haven't submitted
> these earlier:
>
>
>    1. Page 10, line 267: "extrude ABS and/or PLA filaments" might be
>    better phrased as "extrude filaments of ABS, PLA, or other substances"
>    2. Page 10, line 271: "Discovery of 3D Printers is based on..."
>    perhaps should be "Discovery of IPP 3D Printers is based on..."
>    3. Page 12, section 2.5: the URL highlighting seems to be inconsistent
>    - only one is in blue with an underline
>    4. Page 12, section 2.5: 3MF isn't listed here as an organization, but
>    ought to be?
>    5. Page 13, line 347 / 350 / 352 / etc.: The reference doesn't seem to
>    be a bookmark that can take the reader to the reference listing
>    6. Page 13, line 357: PDF isn't listed as an existing specification
>    7. Page 13, line 358: "...document should define IPP attributes..."
>    changed to be "...document defines IPP attributes..."
>    8. Page  22, line 559: "DNS-SD based Discovery" might instead be
>    "DNS-SD for service advertisement and discovery". Also, not quite sure why
>    "Discovery" is capitalized here...
>    9. Page 22, line 573: Some weird pagination stuff going on - lines
>    574-576 should be on page 22, and Table 2 should be on possibly page 22 or
>    maybe page 23. But all the whitespace on page 23 seems to be a formatting
>    glitch.
>    10. Page 24, line 586: "ASSIGN OID HERE"? Is it time to assign the OID?
>    11. Page 25, line 603: Should "[RFC3510] and IPP-USB [IPP-USB]"
>    be "[RFC3510] and/or IPP-USB [IPP-USB]"?
>    12. Page 34, line 729: If "materials-key" is required, then
>    "printer-strings-uri" should also be required, but it isn't listed in table
>    5 / section 6.5
>    13. Page 35, line 759: If "materials-key" is required, then
>    "printer-strings-uri" should also be required, but it isn't listed in table
>    5 / section 6.5
>    14. Page 44, line 979: Is there any requirement as to the document
>    format of the images available at this URI?
>    15. Page 54, section 13.4: Shouldn't the 3MF Consortium be handing the
>    registration of the "media/3mf" media type?
>    16. Page 54, line 1338: The type name "media/3mf" isn't consistent
>    with the type name listed in table 2 ("model/3mf"). Which is correct?
>
> Thanks for the hard work, Mike and all contributors!
>
> Smith
>
> /**
>     Smith Kennedy
>     Wireless Architect - Client Software - IPG-PPS
>     Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum
> / USB IF
>     Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
>     HP Inc.
> */
>
>
>
>
> _________________________________________________________
> Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer
>
>
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