[MFD] My comments on the first 20 pages of the MFD overall spec

[MFD] My comments on the first 20 pages of the MFD overall spec

[MFD] My comments on the first 20 pages of the MFD overall spec

Zehler, Peter Peter.Zehler at xerox.com
Thu Oct 1 18:48:22 UTC 2009


 

1.     Insert before terminology table:

Note:  The definitions below contain common definitions for service
qualified terms.  The '<service>' in the definitions below can be
replaced with 'Copy", 'EmailIn', 'EmailOut', 'FaxIn', 'FaxOut', 'Print',
'Scan', 'Transform' or 'Resource' when the term is used in the
individual Service document.

 

2.      Line 393:<service> Document - A data object, created and managed
by a Service, that contains the description, processing, and status
information of a document submitted by a user. A document object is
bound to a single Job.

 

3.      Line 393:In definition for <service> Document Data:  Change
"above" to "below"

4.      Line 393:Fix <service> Region definition

5.      Line 393:CrossFeed direction: fix ')'

6.      Line 393:Digital Document: rework a bit to make service names
consistent, remove superfluous "Document.",  and include cross reference
to diagram or remove reference.

7.      Line 393:ICC Profile: "(L*a*b*)"  ???

8.      Line 393:Image: replace '14' with 'e'

9.     Line 393:MFD Service:  Is this a generic definition for any of
the defined service types (Copy, EmailIn, EmailOut, FaxIn, FaxOut,
Print, Scan, Transform or Resource) or the definition for the service to
manage the MFD as a whole?

10.  Line 393:Scan Document: delete since it is already covered by
<service> Document

11.  Figure 1:  Shouldn't SystemConfiguration and SystemDescription be
made mandatory in the model?

12.  Figure 2: tone down the blue background to make printed document
easier on the eyes.

13.  492-493: Change "The Job Ticket DocumentProcessing instructions
apply to all documents within the job unless overridden at the document
level with a DocumentTicket" to "The DocumentProcessing instructions
contained in the Job Ticket apply to all documents within the job unless
overridden at the document level with DocumentProcessing instructions in
the DocumentTicket"

14.  Figure 3: Use
<ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/white/ImagingSystem.png> 

 

 

 

Peter Zehler

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