There are a few missing sections in this document, needed before a
Formal Vote - and therefore should be included before a PWG Last
Call (as they must be reviewed then).
I suggest you keep your current outline with the following additions:
1. Introduction (Informative)
2. Terminology ***
-- can't be imported from MFD Overall due to PWG Process
2.1. Conformance Terminology ***
-- define use of lowercase should and may
2.2. Imaging System Terminology ***
-- cut-and-paste from MFD Overall
3. Background ... (Informative)
4. Scope ...
5. Use Cases ...
6. Design Requirements
7. IANA and PWG Considerations ***
-- none - future services should update PWG SM and XML Schema
8. Internationalization Considerations ***
-- none - future services should use UTF-8 and natural language tags
9. Security Considerations ***
-- none - future services should use native security, e.g., WS-Security
10.1 Normative References ***
10.2 Informative References ***
11. Editor's Address ***
12. Appendix X Change Log ***
A nit - please titlecase your section titles - all uppercase is unreadable.
Talk to you later today.
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
Co-Chair - TCG Hardcopy WG
IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
Blue Roof Music/High North Inc
mailto:blueroofmusic at gmail.com
579 Park Place Saline, MI 48176
PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839
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