[MFD] MFD Requirements has missing sections

[MFD] MFD Requirements has missing sections

[MFD] MFD Requirements has missing sections

Ira McDonald blueroofmusic at gmail.com
Thu May 27 16:49:31 UTC 2010


Hi Bill,

There are a few missing sections in this document, needed before a
Formal Vote - and therefore should be included before a PWG Last
Call (as they must be reviewed then).

I suggest you keep your current outline with the following additions:

1. Introduction (Informative)
2. Terminology ***
-- can't be imported from MFD Overall due to PWG Process
2.1. Conformance Terminology ***
-- define use of lowercase should and may
2.2. Imaging System Terminology ***
-- cut-and-paste from MFD Overall
3. Background ... (Informative)
4. Scope ...
5. Use Cases ...
6. Design Requirements
7. IANA and PWG Considerations ***
-- none - future services should update PWG SM and XML Schema
8. Internationalization Considerations ***
-- none - future services should use UTF-8 and natural language tags
9. Security Considerations ***
-- none - future services should use native security, e.g., WS-Security
10. References
10.1 Normative References ***
10.2 Informative References ***
11. Editor's Address ***
12. Appendix X Change Log ***

A nit - please titlecase your section titles - all uppercase is unreadable.

Talk to you later today.

Cheers,
- Ira

Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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