[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

Nancy.Chen at okidata.com Nancy.Chen at okidata.com
Wed Jul 21 21:26:24 UTC 2010


Hi Bill,

A few more editorial comments:

Page 2 and beyond - the revision Date (June 20, 2010) at the righ upper 
corner of each page is wrong.

Section 5.3.1.4
Line 434: I thought we agreed that all "Service" should be changed to 
<service>?
Line 442: "Resource" is mispelled.

Section 5.3.2.2
Lines 473, 479, 481, 484, 485, 489, 490, 494: "Service" should be changed 
to <service>?

Section 5.3.3
Line 501: change "PhysicalDocument TicketDocument Ticket" to "Physical 
Document Ticket"
Line 502: change "PhysicalJob Ticket" to "Physical Job Ticket "
Line 514: change "PhysicalJob Ticket" to "Physicalb Job Ticket".
Line 515: same change as Line 514.
Line 519: remove duplicated "and" and duplicated "Document Ticket"
Line 524: change "Physical Document TicketDocument Ticket" to "Physical 
Document Ticket"
Line 525: remove dulplicated "Document Ticket"

Section 5.3.4.1
Line 541: extra '.' preceeding "Document"

Section 5.3.4.3
Line 551: "local client" should be capitalized
Line 554: "User Client" should be "Local Client"
Line 560: change "Job TicketDefault Job Ticket" to "Default Job Ticket"

Section 9
Lines 684-685: change the color of text to black.

Regards,
-Nancy

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Nancy Chen, PWG Vice-Chair
Principal Engineer
Solutions and Technology
Oki Data
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Phone: (856)222-7006
Email: Nancy.Chen at okidata.com




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[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution





The updated MFD Modeling Requirements document reflecting the comments  at
last Thursday's call is at:

The updated document is accessible at:

ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720.pdf

ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720-rev.doc



I suggest that the un-redlined copy be reviewed.



I will update the text comments resolution later.



Thanks.



Bill Wagner








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