[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

William Wagner wamwagner at comcast.net
Thu Jul 22 01:09:29 UTC 2010


Hi Nancy,

 

Thank you for your comments.

 All comments have been implemented except:

 

1.     My understanding was that the requested translation from Service  to
<service> applied only where Service was part of a term such as "Service Job
Ticket" .that becomes <service> Job Ticket because for, example, there is a
Scan Job Ticket but no Service Job Ticket. However, the term Service is
defined as pertaining to any of the Imaging Services, and a phrase such as
"The Service scans the first sheet." would appear both  appropriate and much
easier to read.

2.      

Bill Wagner

 

From: Nancy.Chen at okidata.com [mailto:Nancy.Chen at okidata.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, July 21, 2010 5:26 PM
To: William Wagner
Cc: mfd at pwg.org; mfd-bounces at pwg.org
Subject: Re: [MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

 


Hi Bill, 

A few more editorial comments: 

Page 2 and beyond - the revision Date (June 20, 2010) at the righ upper
corner of each page is wrong. 

Section 5.3.1.4 
Line 434: I thought we agreed that all "Service" should be changed to
<service>? 
Line 442: "Resource" is mispelled. 

Section 5.3.2.2 
Lines 473, 479, 481, 484, 485, 489, 490, 494: "Service" should be changed to
<service>? 

Section 5.3.3 
Line 501: change "PhysicalDocument TicketDocument Ticket" to "Physical
Document Ticket" 
Line 502: change "PhysicalJob Ticket" to "Physical Job Ticket " 
Line 514: change "PhysicalJob Ticket" to "Physicalb Job Ticket". 
Line 515: same change as Line 514. 
Line 519: remove duplicated "and" and duplicated "Document Ticket" 
Line 524: change "Physical Document TicketDocument Ticket" to "Physical
Document Ticket" 
Line 525: remove dulplicated "Document Ticket" 

Section 5.3.4.1 
Line 541: extra '.' preceeding "Document" 

Section 5.3.4.3 
Line 551: "local client" should be capitalized 
Line 554: "User Client" should be "Local Client" 
Line 560: change "Job TicketDefault Job Ticket" to "Default Job Ticket" 

Section 9 
Lines 684-685: change the color of text to black. 

Regards, 
-Nancy 

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[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution

 

		



The updated MFD Modeling Requirements document reflecting the comments  at
last Thursday's call is at:

The updated document is accessible at:

ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720.pdf

ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720-rev.doc



I suggest that the un-redlined copy be reviewed.



I will update the text comments resolution later.



Thanks.



Bill Wagner








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