[MFD] Canon has reviewed the MFD Model and Common Semantics and has comments

[MFD] Canon has reviewed the MFD Model and Common Semantics and has comments

[MFD] Canon has reviewed the MFD Model and Common Semantics and has comments

Yardumian, Rick RYardumian at cusa.canon.com
Thu Feb 24 00:56:47 UTC 2011


Here are the comments about from Canon for document "MFD Model and Common Semantics" wd-mfdmodel10-20110222.docx

- line 561-562, "it describes" is repeated twice
- line 624, "WKV defines the values are" should be "WKV defines the values that are"
- "Table -2 Basic Element Datatypes", Abstract Datatype=keyword, sentence 4
  - "Schema keywords be deleting hyphens" should be "Schema keywords by deleting hyphens"
- line 942 has two periods at the end of the sentence
- line 1268 remove the period after "common."
- line 1367 need a period after "Figure 52"
- line 1368 need a period after "Table 36"
- "Table 50 Imaging Service Job Processing Capabilities", Element JobDelayOtuputUntilTime, Description: change "dlay" to "delay"
- line 1754 need a period after ""Service State element"
- line 2004 "Figure101with" needs a space before the "with"
- line 2263 needs a period
- line 2270 needs a period
- line 2276 needs a period
- line 2289 needs a period
- line 2358
  - change "Job. ese" to "Job. These"
  - change "directly affects" to "directly affect"
- line 2433 change "doses" to "does"
- line 2662 needs a period




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