[MFD] High North has reviewed the Copy Service Semantic Model and Service Interface specification and has comments

[MFD] High North has reviewed the Copy Service Semantic Model and Service Interface specification and has comments

[MFD] High North has reviewed the Copy Service Semantic Model and Service Interface specification and has comments

Ira McDonald blueroofmusic at gmail.com
Thu Apr 28 17:49:36 UTC 2011


Hi,                                             Thursday (28 April 2011)

High North has reviewed the 27 April draft of the Copy Service and has
comments.

Cheers,
- Ira

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            [Comments on 27 April draft of Copy Service]


Global - reference to MFD Model
- change "[MFD]"
  to "[PWG5108.01]" (it's a PWG Candidate Standard)

Global - English usage
- change "as being included in the yellow box."
  to "by being included in the yellow box."

Line 22 - boilerplate
- add the following text and URIs:

  This document is a PWG Working Draft.  For a definition of "PWG
  Working Draft", see:

      ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/pwg-process30.pdf

  This document is available electronically at:

      ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdcopymodel10-20110427.pdf

Line 172 - typo
- delete underscore from "enterprise-connected_multifunction device"

Line 215 - section title incorrect
- change "Naming conventions for Overall specification and this
  specification"
  to "Naming Conventions" (for clarity)

Line 225 - requirements reference
- add sentence:

  "This specification is based on common requirements defined in the
  Multifunction Device Service Model Requirements [MFDREQ]"
  (informative reference)

Line 235 - typo
- change "as out of scope:"
  to "are out of scope:"

Line 315 - Table 1 - typo
- in "CopyDocumentProcessingCapabilities" delete extra comma after
  "Page Delivery"

Line 330 - text color
Line 358 to 359 - text color
Line 370 - text color
- change "MFD Model and Common Semantics" from RED to BLACK text

Line 461 - document name
- change "MFD specifications"
  to "MFD Model and Common Semantics specification"

Line 496 - typo
- delete leading SPACE from this paragraph

Line 497 - typo
- change "inter-operate"
  to "interoperate"

Lines 498 to 499 - conformance requirement
- change "Clients may choose"
  to "Clients MUST"

Line 516 - missing conformance section
- add the following text:

  10.2.3 Job History

  Conforming Copy Service implementations MUST retain every Job in the
  JobHistory for at least 300 seconds (see section 7).

Line 529 - informal reference
Line 532 - informal reference
Line 535 - informal reference
- delete quotes around MFD Model
- add trailing reference "[PWG5108.01]"

Line 540 to 547 - text color
- change references from RED to BLACK text

Line 540 - reference date
- change "April 26, 2011" to "April 15, 2011" (end-of-vote date)

Line 541 - reference URI
- add correct URI to CS version with April 15th file date

Line 561 - informative reference
- add for Section 4 Requirements

[MFDREQ]
  "Multifunction Device Service Model Requirements", September 1, 2010,
  N. Chen, I. McDonald, W. Wagner, P. Zehler,
  ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/informational/req-mfdreq10-20100901.pdf

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