Hi, Thursday (28 April 2011)
High North has reviewed the 27 April draft of the Copy Service and has
comments.
Cheers,
- Ira
------------------------------------------------------------------------
[Comments on 27 April draft of Copy Service]
Global - reference to MFD Model
- change "[MFD]"
to "[PWG5108.01]" (it's a PWG Candidate Standard)
Global - English usage
- change "as being included in the yellow box."
to "by being included in the yellow box."
Line 22 - boilerplate
- add the following text and URIs:
This document is a PWG Working Draft. For a definition of "PWG
Working Draft", see:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/pwg-process30.pdf
This document is available electronically at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdcopymodel10-20110427.pdf
Line 172 - typo
- delete underscore from "enterprise-connected_multifunction device"
Line 215 - section title incorrect
- change "Naming conventions for Overall specification and this
specification"
to "Naming Conventions" (for clarity)
Line 225 - requirements reference
- add sentence:
"This specification is based on common requirements defined in the
Multifunction Device Service Model Requirements [MFDREQ]"
(informative reference)
Line 235 - typo
- change "as out of scope:"
to "are out of scope:"
Line 315 - Table 1 - typo
- in "CopyDocumentProcessingCapabilities" delete extra comma after
"Page Delivery"
Line 330 - text color
Line 358 to 359 - text color
Line 370 - text color
- change "MFD Model and Common Semantics" from RED to BLACK text
Line 461 - document name
- change "MFD specifications"
to "MFD Model and Common Semantics specification"
Line 496 - typo
- delete leading SPACE from this paragraph
Line 497 - typo
- change "inter-operate"
to "interoperate"
Lines 498 to 499 - conformance requirement
- change "Clients may choose"
to "Clients MUST"
Line 516 - missing conformance section
- add the following text:
10.2.3 Job History
Conforming Copy Service implementations MUST retain every Job in the
JobHistory for at least 300 seconds (see section 7).
Line 529 - informal reference
Line 532 - informal reference
Line 535 - informal reference
- delete quotes around MFD Model
- add trailing reference "[PWG5108.01]"
Line 540 to 547 - text color
- change references from RED to BLACK text
Line 540 - reference date
- change "April 26, 2011" to "April 15, 2011" (end-of-vote date)
Line 541 - reference URI
- add correct URI to CS version with April 15th file date
Line 561 - informative reference
- add for Section 4 Requirements
[MFDREQ]
"Multifunction Device Service Model Requirements", September 1, 2010,
N. Chen, I. McDonald, W. Wagner, P. Zehler,
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/informational/req-mfdreq10-20100901.pdf
------------------------------------------------------------------------
--
This message has been scanned for viruses and
dangerous content by MailScanner, and is
believed to be clean.
-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://www.pwg.org/pipermail/mfd/attachments/20110428/ffc48c7a/attachment-0001.html>