Minor editorial comments:
Table 3 - meaning of "implicit" is unclear
Line 707 - Information should be initial caps. Also should appendix be
Line 708 - space after Table 4
Table 4 - some field values have unfortunate break (e.g. entries under
DocumentDigitalSignatureSupplied, JobHoldUntilTime). Also, it would be
better to avoid page breaks splitting up element properties
Table 4 - Units element name is not bold
Line 731 - Should appendix be labeled Normative?
Section 16 - Although the necessary information in provided between Section
15 and 16, and it is understood that capabilities elements mirror job
ticket elements except for syntax, it is a little disconcerting to see Print
Service Capabilities as just a listing of data types. I would suggest
section 16 be ordered by element, giving the different syntax and perhaps
constrant. Full replication of the other fields from Section 15 probably
would not be necessary. (I realize this would be time consuming and, if the
consensus is that this is desirable, I would be willing to help create this
Section 17 - should appendix be labeled Informative?
Line 769 - Should be new page, Appendix D (already have a Appendix C) and
labeled Informative. Note subsequent appendixes need to be renumbered
Line 770 - space after "Table 7"
Line 777 - Should be Appendix E. It is confusing have two sections with the
same title. Also, since Print Service Capabilities is one of the subjects
of the paper (although the title evades this by referring to associated
capabilities, with the distinction unclear), why is this section not in the
main body of the specification.
Line 783 - is table 3 the intended reference? If so, might be better to
repeat the table without the compliance information.
Line 791-794 excess lines
Line 860 - Suggest new page, correct appendix letter, informative?,
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