Pete
Section 14 and all element that are some sort of cover (coverback, coverfront, jobcoverback, jobcoverfront) should have a note stating that they are of type CoverCol. Currently, there is note (See also Job CoverBack[CoverFront]) but there is no real place to see this. Suggested change is to replace the existing note with (Type is CoverCol Datatype, see §6.1.1).
Glen
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From: Petrie, Glen
Sent: Tuesday, July 03, 2012 9:05 AM
To: Petrie, Glen; 'Zehler, Peter'; 'mfd at pwg.org'
Subject: RE: [MFD] RE: [Pwg-Announce] PWG Formal Vote: PWG Print Job Ticket andAssociatedCapabilities (PJT)
Pete,
There is no element description for jobCollationType (or any collation) type in section 14.
Glen
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From: Petrie, Glen
Sent: Monday, July 02, 2012 9:10 AM
To: Petrie, Glen; 'Zehler, Peter'; 'mfd at pwg.org'
Subject: RE: [MFD] RE: [Pwg-Announce] PWG Formal Vote: PWG Print Job Ticket andAssociatedCapabilities (PJT)
Peter,
There is an MS Word Error! on Page 59, line 784
For OutputBinWKV: it seems to be a mix of dash-notation and camelcase: i.e. large-capacity => Large-capacity should be LargeCapacity. And for MediaInputTray, the wkv's are "dash format".
Could a footnote be added to those Keywords in Table 6 that could not be camelcase and a general statement of why? (I.e. value from other standards). Note: the more I work with pjt WKVs, it because difficult to keep up with those that are in one format or the other.
Ops, section 21 discusses this. I would strongly recommend that content in section 21.1 be moved to section 16.1 just above the WKV table 6; so it is understood what changes were from IPP in the section listing the new format of attribute/element values. A note can be added that other dashed-formatted WKV are from other specification; and where not camelcased.
Can the JSON version (line 861) start at the top of a new page?
I believe, that Appendix G should start at the top of a new page and the JSON version in this appendix
Glen
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From: mfd-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:mfd-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of Petrie, Glen
Sent: Monday, July 02, 2012 8:49 AM
To: Zehler, Peter; mfd at pwg.org
Subject: [MFD] RE: [Pwg-Announce] PWG Formal Vote: PWG Print Job Ticket andAssociatedCapabilities (PJT)
Peter,
I started reviewing the SM2 document posted below but I believe some may be needed.
1. Bulleted sections, like on page 12, are in a smaller font than the rest of the document. I recommend all font size be the same
2. In figure 2.0 if PrintJobDescription:JobName is required, then the connector for PrintJobDescription in the diagram should be solid.
3. Why does Figure 5 not have a yellow background.
4. Figure 8, 15, 16 and most figures afterwards have an image/font size that is very marginal and can be difficult to read when printed.
5. On Page 32, the small table is split across pages.
6. I would suggest starting Table 4 on a new page and a new page mark at the end of the table (the same for Table 5).
glen
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From: pwg-announce-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:pwg-announce-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of Zehler, Peter
Sent: Saturday, June 30, 2012 5:38 AM
To: pwg-announce at pwg.org
Subject: [Pwg-Announce] PWG Formal Vote: PWG Print Job Ticket and AssociatedCapabilities (PJT)
Greetings:
VOTES ARE CONFIDENTIAL! See voting instructions below.
This email initiates the Formal Approval vote by the PWG membership on the
PWG Print Job Ticket and Associated Capabilities specification (PJT), which is located at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-sm20-printjobticket10-20120630.pdf
The complete list of PWG Last Call issues and resolutions is located at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/PrintJobTicketLastCallComment-resolution-20120630.pdf
VOTING PERIOD: This Formal Vote will start today on Saturday 30 June 2012
and will end at 10pm (US Pacific Time) on Monday 30 July 2012.
Valid votes are: Yes, No, No (with Strong Objection), Abstain.
Representatives from PWG member companies are strongly encouraged to
exercise their right to vote.
PWG Privacy Policy: Your vote is confidential and will not be disclosed
by PWG officers or document editors.
HOW TO VOTE:
Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:
PWG PJT Formal Vote-<company name>-<voter's last name>-<Yes/No/Abstain>
Example:
PWG PJT Formal Vote-Acme-McGee-Yes
Rules:
(1) Any "No" vote MUST state the reason for the "No" vote and MUST contain
a description of the *technical* changes required to turn the "No" vote into a
"Yes" vote - otherwise the "No" vote will NOT be counted, per PWG Process/3.0.
(2) Any "No" vote MUST NOT contain *editorial* comments, per PWG Process/3.0.
(3) Any "Yes" vote MAY contain "editorial" comments, per PWG Process/3.0.
(4) Any "Yes" vote MUST NOT contain any *technical* comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(5) Any "Abstain" vote counts toward quorum, but not approval.
WHERE TO SEND YOUR VOTE:
Please send your vote to *all* of the following email addresses (replacing
"dot" with '.' and "at" with '@'):
msweet "at" apple "dot" com (Mike Sweet, PWG Chair)
blueroofmusic "at" gmail "dot" com (Ira McDonald, PWG Secretary)
peter "dot" zehler "at" xerox "dot" com (Peter Zehler, SM WG Co-Chair, PJT Editor)
Please do NOT simply reply to this note on PWG-Announce or the
IPP WG list (to preserve the confidentiality of your vote).
Notes:
(1) This Formal Vote is being conducted under the rules of the PWG Process/3.0
and the current PWG Policy on Intellectual Property and Confidentiality agreement.
The 2012 PWG Membership Agreement calls out both of these documents and
the links are provided below.
(2) To be eligible to vote the member MUST have submitted a signed copy of
the 2012 PWG Membership Agreement and paid their dues.
The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is
located at:
http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf
The PWG Policy on Intellectual Property and Confidentiality is located at:
http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-ip-policy.pdf
Peter Zehler
Xerox Research Center Webster
Email: Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com <mailto:Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com>
Voice: (585) 265-8755
FAX: (585) 265-7441
US Mail: Peter Zehler
Xerox Corp.
800 Phillips Rd.
M/S 128-25E
Webster NY, 14580-9701
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