I agree with all of Mike's corrections.
I didn't realize that it was OOS-1 that was the problem (I probably mis-read
Mike's previous note). The fix is better.
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On Wed, Nov 20, 2013 at 12:21 PM, Michael Sweet <msweet at apple.com> wrote:
>> Thanks for updating this so quickly.
>> Some small comments:
>> 1. The problem statement now seems really abrupt. How about:
>> "The Semantic Model workgroup has previously modeled and defined
> for the services hosted on Multifunction Devices. With the advent of
> mobile and cloud based imaging applications, the scope of the Semantic
> Model workgroup activities is being expanded to include the modeling
> interfaces of distributed imaging systems."
>> 2. I still feel OOS-1 excludes incorporation of cloud-based solutions
> are indirectly network connected…) A simple fix would be to remove
>> “OOS-1. Definition of any service management or job operations for
> Systems that are not network connected.”
>> 3. JobTicket-2 should probably have the same Q1 2015 milestone as SM3-2
> the two specs are co-dependent.
>>>> On Nov 20, 2013, at 10:53 AM, Paul Tykodi <ptykodi at yahoo.com> wrote:
>> > Hi,
> > The latest draft of the Semantic Model Work Group Charter, incorporating
> all of the suggested edits received on November 19th, has been posted. We
> are hoping to have a stable draft available for tomorrow's PWG Steering
> Committee meeting so that the charter can be approved.
> > The draft charter can be found here:
> > ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120.docx> > ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120.pdf> >
> > Red line versions
> > ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120-rev.docx> > ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120-rev.pdf> >
> > Please review the draft and post any comments with suggestions for
> changes to the sm3 e-mail list before 2:00 PM EST this coming Thursday
> (Sept 21st).
> > Thanks.
> > Best Regards,
> > /Paul
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