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WIMS> Counter MIB Last Call Comments

WIMS> Counter MIB Last Call Comments

Bergman, Ron Ron.Bergman at rpsa.ricoh.com
Fri Apr 8 18:24:32 EDT 2005


I have two comments on this document.

1. Invalid examples in the description clause for:

icKeySubunitType  The text "(e.g., print, copy, etc.)" is incorrect
for this object.  Should be "(e.g., inputTray, outputBin, etc.)".

2. Unclear wording in the description clauses for:

icSheetBlackSheets:
   Current:
        "Black media sheets printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
        'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using only black colorant."

icSheetBlankSheets
   Current:
        "Blank media sheets printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
        'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') without an image."

icSheetFullColorSheets
   Current:
        "Full color media sheets printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
        'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using full color."

icSheetHighlightColorSheets
   Current:
        "Highlight color media sheets printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
        'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using a highlight color."

icMediaUsedBlackSheets
   Current:
        "Black sheets of this specific media printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
        (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using only black colorant."

icMediaUsedBlankSheets
   Current:
        "Blank sheets of this specific media printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
        (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') without an image."

icMediaUsedFullColorSheets
   Current:
        "Full color sheets of this specific media printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
        (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using full color."

icMediaUsedHighlightColorSheets
   Current:
        "Highlight color sheets of this specific media printed by this
        managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
        or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
   Suggested:
        "Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
        (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
        'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using a highlight color."

	Ron Bergman
	Ricoh Printing Systems America


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