WIMS> Caption updates for Fig 3 & 4 in WIMS Counter spec

WIMS> Caption updates for Fig 3 & 4 in WIMS Counter spec

WIMS> Caption updates for Fig 3 & 4 in WIMS Counter spec

McDonald, Ira imcdonald at sharplabs.com
Wed Jul 27 11:41:29 EDT 2005


Hi,

Reminder that these updates for the Captions _within_ figures 3 & 4
materially clarify and _connect_ the two figures (and also align
them with the actual element group names in the Semantic Model).

Cheers,
- Ira

Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
PO Box 221  Grand Marais, MI  49839
phone: +1-906-494-2434
email: imcdonald at sharplabs.com

> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-wims at pwg.org [mailto:owner-wims at pwg.org]On Behalf Of
> McDonald, Ira
> Sent: Friday, July 15, 2005 5:28 PM
> To: 'wims at pwg.org'
> Subject: WIMS> Caption updates for Fig 3 & 4 in WIMS Counter spec
> 
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Here are the caption updates _within_ Figures 3 and 4 for the WIMS
> Counter Spec.  They simply align the model terms better.
> 
> (1) Figure 3 - At top
> 	(1a) - Change 'Imaging System' to 'Imaging System (Server*)'
> 	(1b) - Footnote '* Server is the root node in the PWG Semantic
> Model'
> 
> (2) Figure 3 - Inside 'System' circle
> 	(2a) - Change 'Status' to 'SystemStatus'
> 	(2b) - Change 'Counters' to 'SystemTotals'
> 
> (3) Figure 3 - Inside 'Service' circle
> 	(3a) - Change 'Status' to 'ServiceStatus'
> 	(3b) - Change 'Counters' to 'ServiceCounters'
> 
> (4) Figure 4 - At top inside solid line 
>     (where figure 3 now says 'Imaging System (Server)')
> 	(4a) - Add Boldface/Capitalized 'ServiceCounters'
> 
> That's it.  Leave the figure titles alone - they're fine.
> 
> Cheers,
> - Ira
> 
> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
> Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
> PO Box 221  Grand Marais, MI  49839
> phone: +1-906-494-2434
> email: imcdonald at sharplabs.com
> 



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