[WIMS] Apple has reviewed the PWG MFD Alerts specification and has comments

[WIMS] Apple has reviewed the PWG MFD Alerts specification and has comments

[WIMS] Apple has reviewed the PWG MFD Alerts specification and has comments

Michael Sweet msweet at apple.com
Mon Mar 19 15:19:12 UTC 2012


Comments:

Line 69: Remove and then fix-up pagination of boilerplate section

Line 114: There really should be more text here, probably from the web site, (this is the "About" text)

Line 249 (section 3.1): "In recent years network printers have evolved .." - maybe reword as "in the years since the Printer MIB v2 was published"?

IANA registry stuff looks accurate and has the correct format (imports fine with my little tool I use to make changes to the XML...)

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Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair


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