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<html xmlns:v="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m="http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40"><head><meta http-equiv=Content-Type content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"><meta name=Generator content="Microsoft Word 12 (filtered medium)"><style></style></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks Michael,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>General agreement  except as noted:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Item 4.  “modem” , regardless of its origin, is now a distinct word in the dictionaries<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Line spacing : although the presentation in the PDF should look consistent, it may be OK to fudge MS Word occasionally, as long as the un-line-numbered PDF looks OK.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Item 8. Footer gets split after page 10. (need to remove one of the spaces in the template, perhaps two if number of pages exceeds 99). That will resolve cited whitespace problem.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Note also, it appears that template header and footer  were modified by adding multiple LFCR, making margins wider. I don’t think that is necessary.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Bill Wagner<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> wims-bounces@pwg.org [mailto:wims-bounces@pwg.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Michael Sweet<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, February 27, 2012 6:22 PM<br><b>To:</b> Ira McDonald<br><b>Cc:</b> pmp@pwg.org; wims@pwg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [WIMS] Printer MIB and IPP MFD Alerts - Stable draft (26 Feb 2012)<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>My comments:<o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>1. Abstract: maybe spell out facsimile here instead of just using "fax", and I suggest combining paragraph 1 and 2 since there is duplicate information (and "This document also ..." is used a couple times in a row) - I'm a big fan of short abstracts...<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>2. Page 4: Should add "About the Workgroup for Imaging Management Solutions" section with the links to the PMP activity in it (just like we do for others...)<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>3. Page 7: Most printers sold today are MFDs, so I would recommend just dropped "in office environments".<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>4. Global: Do we care that MODEM is an acronym (MOdulator DEModulator) and not an ordinary word?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>5. Page 8, section 2.2:<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span>            </span>a. Line 214: extra blank line<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span>            </span>b. Lines 224-225: Wrong paragraph style, so you needed an extra blank line?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>6. Page 9, section 3.1:<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span>            </span>a. Line 232: Missing space - list style issue? (should be 12pt before, suppress between paragraphs of same style), see page 11, section 3.4 which has a different style...<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>7. Page 14, Section 4.2, Line 337: "Fax Modem" has a space, but none of the other subunits do. Typo?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>8. Global: Check that your footer text has a space before the "Page N of M" line; Page 16 has no whitespace between the table and footer...<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>9. Page 22, Section 8, Line 452: New paragraph?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>10. Page 26, Section 9.3: Wrong format for registrations; see existing 5100.x specs for the format...<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>11. Page 30, Section 11: "Michael Sweet" instead of "Mike Sweet"<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>That's all!<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>On Feb 26, 2012, at 9:16 AM, Ira McDonald wrote:<o:p></o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><br><br><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Hi folks,<br><br>[For WIMS WG last call]<br><br><br>I just posted a Stable draft of the Printer MIB and IPP MFD Alerts <br>(MFD Alerts) specification at:<br><br><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/pmp/wd/wd-pmpmfdalerts10-20120226.pdf" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/pmp/wd/wd-pmpmfdalerts10-20120226.pdf</a> / doc<br>- clean copy with line numbers and live table of contents<br><br><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/pmp/wd/wd-pmpmfdalerts10-20120226-rev.pdf" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/pmp/wd/wd-pmpmfdalerts10-20120226-rev.pdf</a> / doc<br>- redlines copy with line numbers and live table of contents<br><br>Note 1:  This version is technically complete, the IPP binding has been <br>prototyped by Apple, and this document is ready for WG last call.<br><br>Note 2:  There is still a trailing blank line at the end of section 6.4, but this is<br>an artifact of the PDF creation (it doesn't show in the MS Word source).<br><br>Comments?<br><br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br>-----------------------------------------------------------------<o:p></o:p></p><div id=":7i"><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Change History for version of 26 February 2012 – Stable<o:p></o:p></p></div></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><br clear=all>Status:  Changed status to Stable based on Apple reported prototype <br>of IPP binding, per WIMS WG review.<br><br>Editorial:  Revised section 3.3 Out-of-Scope to change “must not” to <br>“should not”, since section 3 Requirements is Informative.<br><br>Editorial:  Revised headers of Table 2 in section 5.2 and Table 3 in <br>section 5.3 to delete redundant word “Value” and thus correct widowed <br>line at bottom of Table 2 (see clean version), per WIMS WG review.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><br>-- <br>This message has been scanned for viruses and <br>dangerous content by <a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is <br>believed to be clean. _______________________________________________<br>wims mailing list<br><a href="mailto:wims@pwg.org">wims@pwg.org</a><br><a href="https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/wims">https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/wims</a><o:p></o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Monaco","serif";color:black'>________________________________________________________________________<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Monaco","serif";color:black'>Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><br>-- <br>This message has been scanned for viruses and <br>dangerous content by <a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is <br>believed to be clean. <o:p></o:p></p></div><br />-- <br />This message has been scanned for viruses and <br />dangerous content by <a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is <br />believed to be clean. </body></html>