Hi,
Sorry about that - email system deleted all the URLs. Here they are:
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idshcdsec10-20200120.docxhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idshcdsec10-20200120.pdfhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idshcdsec10-20200120-rev.docxhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idshcdsec10-20200120-rev.pdf
Cheers,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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On Mon, Jan 20, 2020 at 12:57 PM Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com>
wrote:
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> Change History
> 20 January 2020
>> Interim draft – updates from IDS WG review on 9 January 2020.
> - Corrected author and title metadata.
> - Corrected title of HCDPP in section 1 Introduction and section 10
> References (need URI).
> - Revised section 2.3 Security Terminology to delete trailing “d” and at
> end of section.
> - Revised section 3.4 Design Requirements to change “5100.4” to “5110.4”
> and correct spelling of “recommendations”.
> - Revised section 6. HCD System Architecture to change “channel” to
> “channel isolation”.
> - Revised section 10. References to delete leading space in [BCP61],
> change [XML] to [W3C-XML], change [XSD] to [W3C-XSD], and fix broken format
> of [W3C-XSD].
> - Revised section 12 Appendix A – Internet Protocol Suite to distinguish
> which protocols “can be used in the Internet Protocol Suite” (non-IETF
> protocols) from protocols “in the Internet Protocol Suite” (IETF protocols)
> and also to change “is is” to “is” in Syslog subsection.
> - TODO – Move all notes on inappropriate protocols for HCDs from section
> 12 to section 4 (when those subsections are added).
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