IPP> RE: Review of Event Notification Specification

IPP> RE: Review of Event Notification Specification

IPP> RE: Review of Event Notification Specification

Herriot, Robert Robert.Herriot at pahv.xerox.com
Fri Aug 18 15:35:04 EDT 2000


Thanks for the feedback.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ron Bergman [mailto:rbergma at hitachi-hkis.com]
> Sent: Thursday, July 27, 2000 8:33 AM
> Bob,
> 
> The improvements you made to the specification look great!
> It is now much better organized and easier to follow.

Thanks.
> 
> I did find the following in my quick review of the pdf version
> (draft-ietf-ipp-not-spec-04.txt  July 13, 2000)
> 
> line 653:  'job-purged'  S/B  'job-stopped'

fixed

> 
> line 978:  This heading does not match the subject in 7.1
>            I suggest removing 7.0 and changing 7.1 to 7.0.

added sentence
> 
> line 984:  Change to read "This section defines the Event
>            Notification Attributes."

made a slightly different change
> 
> line 1075: Table five lists "printer-up-time", but we have
>            gone to the trouble of defining an equivalent
>            "notify-printer-up-time".  So why not use it
>            here.

I didn't change because "notify-printer-up-time" is not present in a Per-Job
Subscription Object but "printer-up-time" is always in a Printer Object.
> 
> line 1090: Table 6 lists "job-id", why not "notify-job-id".

I didn't change because "notify-job-id" is not present in a Per-Printer
Subscription Object and such a Subscription Object could listen to Job
Events, such as job-completion which contains the "job-id" of the completed
job in the Event Notification.

> 
> line 1696: First column in the table is "Attribute" S/B
>            "Operation".  The first table entry does not
>            fit with the subject and S/B removed.
fixed.

> 
> line 1806: "Subscription Attributes" S/B "Subscription
>            Description Attributes".
cannot find
> 
> line 1845: Remove "(Editor)"
fixed
> 
> line 1891: Remove "(Editor)"
fixed
> 
> 
>     Ron Bergman
>     Hitachi Koki Imaging Solutions
> 
> 



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