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<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>Hi
Robert,</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2>Attached is a marked-up version of your document. The mark-up
contains suggested changes, and questions or food for thought in the form of
comments. Many are trivial: simple typos, grammar, spelling and
such. Many are suggested wording changes that probably represent personal
preference as much as anything else; if it doesn't seem like an improvement to
you, just throw it in the bit-bucket. ;-)</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>There
are a couple of substantive changes suggested, and if you disagree with or have
questions about those, they would probably merit some
discussion.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>We
have some other comments that we will propose for the XHTML-Print appendix
dealing with the application/vnd.pwg-multiplexed content-type, as they are
specific to situations where the root message of content type
application/vnd.pwg-xhtml-print+xml.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2>Thanks!</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=115462604-20032002><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2>Melinda Grant</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader dir=ltr align=left><FONT face=Tahoma
size=2>-----Original Message-----<BR><B>From:</B> Robert Herriot
[mailto:bob@herriot.com]<BR><B>Sent:</B> Thursday, January 31, 2002 2:35
PM<BR><B>To:</B> ipp@pwg.org; ifx@pwg.org<BR><B>Subject:</B> IPP> Latest
version of application/vnd.pwg-multiplexed<BR><BR></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>The latest version of
application/vnd.pwg-multiplexed (nee application/multiplexed) is now available
at: </FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2><A
href="http://search.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-herriot-application-multiplexed-04.txt">http://search.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-herriot-application-multiplexed-04.txt</A>.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>This version makes many clarifications and
changes its name. However, this version doesn't change the
representation.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>I have requested that the rfc-editor publish it
as an informational RFC.</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV>Bob Herriot</DIV></DIV></FONT></DIV></BLOCKQUOTE></BODY></HTML>