All,
Below are my comments on the document. Two "big" issues are lines 699 and
797 (and 1053). Otherwise, it looks good.
dhw
David H. Whitehead
Development Engineer
Lexmark International, Inc.
859.825.4914
davidatlexmarkdotcom
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ResourceServiceComments
203 add comma "user, if authorized."
333 "... of the resource for which the operation has been completed."
what operation? change to "... for the resource." or "... about the
stored resource."
339 double period.
518 format
543 "This element does not apply to Resource Service." (???)
577 which Group?
598 double period
699 Resource Description -- but the schema shows
ResourceServiceDescription and the elements do not match the subsequent
definitions.
797 ResourceId is of type int -- but it's a GUID! should be string
854 It is *the* implementation's ...
several "Resource Service client" versus "Resource Service Client"
886 ResourceCreatorUserNance
1053 "... and causes the Scan Service to terminate in an orderly
fashion." Should be Resource Service.
If Shutdown terminates the service, how does the service then
process RestartResourceService?
1150 delete "are"
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