[Pwg-Announce] MFD Model and Common Semantics Last Call

[Pwg-Announce] MFD Model and Common Semantics Last Call

William Wagner wamwagner at comcast.net
Mon Feb 21 22:21:38 UTC 2011


In considering the Xerox comments to the MFD Model and Common Semantics , it
appears that the PDF version does not agree with the MS Word file. (The Word
file shows 204 pages while the pdf shows 217.) This likely is partially  a
result of the duplication of figures (as indicated in the comments) which
does not appear in the MS Word version. I apologize for this, but I had
mistakenly expected  the PDF to agree with the MS Word versions, at least in
terms of content if not format. The last call period for this document is
intended to end on 25 February. I will post a version addressing the
comments received to date (with a list of changes) in the next day or two,
provided that I can figure out how to avoid  the MS Word to PDF translation
problem. If reviewing the currently posted document, consider the figures to
appear the first time. The duplicates occurring on later pages are ghosts.

 

Thanks,

 

Bill Wagner

 

From: mfd-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:mfd-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of Zehler,
Peter
Sent: Monday, February 21, 2011 1:05 PM
To: mfd at pwg.org
Subject: [MFD] Xerox has reviewed the MFD Model and Common Semantics and has
comments

 

Here are the comments from Xerox:

 

 

SECTION 2.2.1    page 22               figure 6                  Primary
interfaces is missing a line from scanner subunit to Email Out

Section 2.2.2      page 24
duplicate graphic of figure 7 on page 26.

Section 2.4.2      page 30               line 825                 job
produces 1 ton should be job produces 1 to N

Section 3.2          page 48                line 1149              missing
reference source

Section 3.6          page 60                line 1212              missing
reference source

Section 3.10        page 70                line 1280              missing
reference source
                                                                line 1282
figure 45 should be figure 44

Section 4.3          page 95
duplicate graphic of  figure 62

Section 4.3.1      page 102
10th attribute from the top, is annotation a instance of imposition, if not
it should be added to the graphic

Section 4.3.3      page 112
duplicate graphic of figure 73

                                                                Line 1644
References figure 73 but no graphic below the reference.

                                page 113
duplicate graphic of figure 74
                                page 114
duplicate graphic of figure 75

Section 4.7.1      page 129              line 1759              reference
source not found

Section 5.1          page 132              line 1829              reference
source not found
                                page 133
graphic missing caption Image Job Status Element

                                Page 135              Figure 84
caption not bolded

Section 5.2.1      page 141
does imposition fulfill requirement for annotation programming

Section 5.2.3      page 150
duplicate graphic of figure 94

Section 7.1          page 165              Figure 102           graphic
shows up on this page but is referenced in the document as being on page 167

Section 7.1.4      page 167              line 2126              Scheduling
of Jobs should be scheduling of the service's Jobs. 

Section 7.2.1.     page 168
duplicate graphic of figure 103
                                page 171
duplicate graphic of figure 103
Section 7.3.1.3   page 183              line 2423              reference
source not found
                                                                line 2424
acel<service>job should be Cancel<service>Job

 

 

 

Peter Zehler

Xerox Research Center Webster
Email: Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com
Voice: (585) 265-8755
FAX: (585) 265-7441
US Mail: Peter Zehler
Xerox Corp.
800 Phillips Rd.
M/S 128-25E
Webster NY, 14580-9701 

 


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