Hi,
On further consideration, High North has the following comments:
Section 1 Introduction
- change "normative mapping" to "recommended mapping"
Section 2.1 Conformance Terminology
- please *restore* this section
- but delete MUST, MUST NOT, REQUIRED, and CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED
Section 2.2 Printing Terminology
- change "Normative definitions" to "Definitions"
Section 3.4 Design Requirements for Mapping of JDF to PJT
- In item 2), change "normative specifications" to "specifications"
Section 4 Mapping of CIP4 Job Definition Format (JDF)
- change "MUST" to SHOULD" throughout (i.e., recommendation)
- be careful *not* to change "MustHonor" in Table 1
Section 5 Recommendations
- change "PWG Best documents" to "PWG Best Practices documents"
- change "minimum implementation of the provisions" to "implementation
guidance"
Section 5.1 Print Server Recommendations
- change "MUST to "SHOULD"
- delete "are to"
Section 5.2 Print Device Recommendations
- change "MUST to "SHOULD"
- delete "are to"
Section 6 Internationalization Considerations
- change "MUST support" to "SHOULD support"
- change "Best Practices document conform" to "Best Practices document
SHOULD conform"
Section 7 Security Considerations
- change "Best Practices document follow" to "Best Practices document
SHOULD follow"
(two instances)
Cheers,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
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