Hi,
As Bill pointed out, I cleverly retitled *wrong* to refer to IPP/2.0.
Sorry - too many balls in the air at present...
Cheers,
- Ira
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On Thu, Oct 28, 2010 at 2:21 PM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com>wrote:
> Hi Jerry,
>> Retitled for PWG Last Call quorum visibility.
>> Pasted your comments inline below to show in the WG mail archive.
>> Many thanks for your comments.
>> Cheers,
> - Ira
>> ------------------------------------------------------------
>>> Power Model 26 Sept. 2010.
>> 1. line 285...the sentence is incomplete/fragmented
> 2. line 342...the sentence is incomplete/fragmented
> 3. line 723...extra comma
> 4. line 781...this sentence implies (forever) that something will be
> registered with IANA
> suggest actually registering these values with IANA and updating the
> sentence
> 5. line 903...the sentence states that transitional power states can be
> requested....is this
> true? wouldn't think you should be able to do that...only stable power
> states.
> 6. line 1419....hone should be none
> 7. line 1483, 1484...need space between time and "am"
>>> Power MIB 26 Sept. 2010.
> 1. line 366...need to make sure this link is updated to a stable location
> (currently not a note
> for this)
>>> On Thu, Oct 28, 2010 at 11:34 AM, Jerry Thrasher <thrasher at lexmark.com>wrote:
>>>>> (See attached file: Power_last_call_comments.txt)
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