Are you talking about the table in section 3.1 which has a single letter
wrap onto the next line?  The rest of the document seemed acceptable
to me.
>2.  On page #1, the name of my employer is spelled incorrectly.
Sorry.
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>3.  On page #3, section 1, the first line following the section title just
>    repeats what has already been stated in the title.  This line could be
>    removed with no loss of content.  (minor nit!)
I checked with my technical writer, and she says that tables need to have
something in the text that refers to them.  Tables can't just float in
a document unreferenced.
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>4.  In section 2.3 (Restart-Job), the job state is shown in the table as
>    changing from "processing-stopped" to "processing" and the operation
>    is rejected.  The job state should remain as "processing-stopped".
Good catch!
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>5.  Also in section 2.3 (Restart-Job), I disagree with your discussion
>    concerning accounting applications.  You are making an assumption
>    that an accounting application will be able to recognize that the job
>    was restarted if a new set of accounting information is pushed from
>    the printer.  This is not true for any accounting packages that I am
>    familiar with.  When the accounting package receives the data set for
>    the reprinted job it will most likely do one one of two things; 1) it
>    will recognize that information has been received for the job and 
>    discard the new data, assuming that this was a duplicate packet or 
>    2) just overwrite the original data.  I do not believe that any
>    accounting package would recognize that the job was reprinted and
>    act as stated in your text.  How would the application know the
>    difference between a duplicate packet and the scenario that you
>    proposed?  
Simple!  If the "time-at-event" value is the same it is a duplicate.
If the "time-at-event" value is different, it is a restart and the
accounting application should record both (completion) events.  This
strategy works for both reliable schemes, such as TCP/IP and unreliable
such as UDP.
>    I believe that we agreed in Monterey that the Restart-Job
>    would not be compatible with accounting applications and that a simple
>    note similar to the following would be added:
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>    "NOTE: Resetting the job progress attributes should allow a job
>     monitoring application to function unchanged for a job that has been
>     restarted.  However, since the job-id for the "restarted-job" is
>     identical to the original job, this operation will most likely be
>     incompatible with accounting applications.  It is recommended that
>     the Reprocess-Job operation be used when accurated accounting data
>     is desired."
You have a different recollection than I had of the meeting agreements.
I recall discussion pointing out that using notification ("push") for
accounting as being a much more robost engineering strategy than "pull" 
accounting.
Also it is important to indicate the alternative of using notification 
for accounting, so that the simpler Restart-Job operation can be
implemented with it, instead of the more complex Reprocess-Job operation.  
It would be mis-leading to leave the recommendation that Reprocess-Job 
operation is the only way to get accurate (or robust) accounting.
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>With these changes incorporated, we should have a document that reflects
>the agreements per the Monterey meeting.
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>	Ron Bergman
>	Dataproducts Corp.
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