IPP Mail Archive: IPP> RE: Review of Event Notification Spec

IPP Mail Archive: IPP> RE: Review of Event Notification Spec

IPP> RE: Review of Event Notification Specification

From: Herriot, Robert (Robert.Herriot@pahv.xerox.com)
Date: Fri Aug 18 2000 - 15:35:04 EDT

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    Thanks for the feedback.

    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: Ron Bergman [mailto:rbergma@hitachi-hkis.com]
    > Sent: Thursday, July 27, 2000 8:33 AM
    > Bob,
    >
    > The improvements you made to the specification look great!
    > It is now much better organized and easier to follow.

    Thanks.
    >
    > I did find the following in my quick review of the pdf version
    > (draft-ietf-ipp-not-spec-04.txt July 13, 2000)
    >
    > line 653: 'job-purged' S/B 'job-stopped'

    fixed

    >
    > line 978: This heading does not match the subject in 7.1
    > I suggest removing 7.0 and changing 7.1 to 7.0.

    added sentence
    >
    > line 984: Change to read "This section defines the Event
    > Notification Attributes."

    made a slightly different change
    >
    > line 1075: Table five lists "printer-up-time", but we have
    > gone to the trouble of defining an equivalent
    > "notify-printer-up-time". So why not use it
    > here.

    I didn't change because "notify-printer-up-time" is not present in a Per-Job
    Subscription Object but "printer-up-time" is always in a Printer Object.
    >
    > line 1090: Table 6 lists "job-id", why not "notify-job-id".

    I didn't change because "notify-job-id" is not present in a Per-Printer
    Subscription Object and such a Subscription Object could listen to Job
    Events, such as job-completion which contains the "job-id" of the completed
    job in the Event Notification.

    >
    > line 1696: First column in the table is "Attribute" S/B
    > "Operation". The first table entry does not
    > fit with the subject and S/B removed.
    fixed.

    >
    > line 1806: "Subscription Attributes" S/B "Subscription
    > Description Attributes".
    cannot find
    >
    > line 1845: Remove "(Editor)"
    fixed
    >
    > line 1891: Remove "(Editor)"
    fixed
    >
    >
    > Ron Bergman
    > Hitachi Koki Imaging Solutions
    >
    >



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