Thanks for all your work on this document. It looks *almost* ready to
submit to the IESG!
I have only three comments (you can't get by without some changes):
1. The following text is repeated in both section 3.5.2 and
jobCodedCharSet. I do not believe that it is needed in both places.
Since the text for jobCodedCharSet also references section 3.5.2, this
text could be removed from either place. However, I would rather see
it remain with jobCodedCharSet.
"If the agent does not know what coded character set was used by the
job submitting client, the agent shall either (1) return the
'unknown(2)' value for the jobCodedCharSet attribute or (2) not
return the jobCodedCharSet attribute for the job."
2. In the description for jmJobStateReasons, line 2984 in the .pdf
version without revisions, the word "the" is repeated.
3. A reference to the "Job Submission Protocol Mapping Recommendations
for the Job Monitoring MIB" RFC should be included. Could be in the
Introduction section or Appendix B. (Any other place better?)
Ron