Dave, Mr. Itoh, Alain, and all,
The PWG will discuss eventing and the impact on PSI at
2:00PM PDT on 5/26/04 during the current F2F. This could
have a dramatic impact on the PSI schedule.
Please call in if you can.
Dial In: 1-866-365-4406
Toll #: 1-303-248-9655
Passcode: 2635888#
Thanks,
Alan
-----
Alan Berkema
Senior Engineer Scientist
Connectivity Roseville, CA
Hewlett-Packard Company
Tel: 916 785-5605
e-mail: aberkema@hp.com
-----Original Message-----
From: Masanori ITOH [mailto:ito@src.ricoh.co.jp]
Sent: Wednesday, May 19, 2004 11:07 PM
To: Berkema, Alan C (R&D Roseville)
Cc: Hall, David M; McDonald, Ira; Alain Regnier
Subject: Re^2: For revision of PSI specification document (2004/01/13)
Hi Mr. Berkema,
Thank you for your apology.
That's no problem. Never mind, please.
I thought I should send this report to Mr. Hall rather than you because
he is the editor of PSI-WG.
But I decided to send it to you because my some E-mails could not be
reached to Mr. Hall when I posted to him and I received the error
message automatically sent from HP mail server, that is "Delivery to the
following
recipients failed. david_hall3@am.exch.hp.com".
If that is not appropriate, I have to apologize to you for that.
Cheers,
-----------------------
Masanonri Itoh
RICOH Co., Ltd. Software R&D Center
Mr. Berkema, Alan C (R&D Roseville) wrote on Wed, 19 May 2004 10:06:38
-0700
-----Original Message-----
Sorry about the type in Mr. Itoh's name below, accidentally hit the send
before reviewing regards, Alan
-----
Alan Berkema
Senior Engineer Scientist
Connectivity Roseville, CA
Hewlett-Packard Company
Tel: 916 785-5605
e-mail: aberkema@hp.com
-----Original Message-----
From: Berkema, Alan C (R&D Roseville)
Sent: Wednesday, May 19, 2004 9:20 AM
To: 'Masanori ITOH'
Cc: Hall, David M; McDonald, Ira; Alain Regnier
Subject: RE: For revision of PSI specification document (2004/01/13)
Mr Itch,
Thanks for your careful review,
Dave can you make these editorial corrections for the next re-vote?
Thanks,
Alan
--------- Alan Berkema Senior Engineer Scientist Connectivity Roseville, CA Hewlett-Packard Company Tel: 916 785-5605 e-mail: aberkema@hp.com
-----Original Message----- From: Masanori ITOH [mailto:ito@src.ricoh.co.jp] Sent: Monday, May 17, 2004 7:59 PM To: Berkema, Alan C (R&D Roseville) Cc: Hall, David M; McDonald, Ira; Alain Regnier Subject: For revision of PSI specification document (2004/01/13)
Hi Mr. Berkema,
I found some mistakes in the document of PSI specification (2004/01/13). So I inform you, chairperson of PSI-WG about them.
If PSI-WG will have chance of revision (e.g. when specification of 'UnsupportedElements' may be changed or new different return name from 'UnsupportedElements' may be defined ), please refer to them.
Will you please point out any mistakes to me in this report.
Cheers,
----------------------- Masanonri Itoh RICOH Co., Ltd. Software R&D Center
-------------------------------------------------------------------- P.9 JobControlInterface 'GetJobs'
CHANGING 'JobContainter' (misspelling)
i.e. ...... jobs:JobContainter, ...... -> jobs:JobContainer ^^^^^^^^^ -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.10 TargetDeviceSupportInterface 'FetchNextDocumentByValue'
DELETING 'Boolen' (Duplicate type definition of 'documentNumber' ?)
i.e. FetchNextDocumentByValue(jobURI:URI) : documentNumber:int, Boolean ...... -> FetchNextDocumentByValue(jobURI:URI) : documentNumber:int, ...... -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.20 5.3.2 QuerySupportedInterfaces Returns: interfaceIdentifier:InterfaceIdentifierContainer
MAKING the PLURAL FORM 'interfaceIdentifier' (cf. P.25 'targetDeviceIdentifiers:TargetDeviceIdentifierContainer' of '5.4.3 GetKnownTargetDevices' )
i.e. interfaceIdentifier : InterfaceIdentifierContainer -> interfaceIdentifiers : InterfaceIdentifierContainer ^ -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.21 5.3.3 QueryInterfaceDefinition Exceptions: 'Description' of 'ClientErrorUnsupportedInterface'
CHANGING '<secure>' (cf. P.84 '7.4 InterfaceIdentifier' )
i.e. <secure> -> <sec> -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.32 5.5.2 CreateJob Parameters: description of 'requestedTargetDeviceDataType'
What is 'a ProcessingRequestUnsupported exception' ? Is it the older version of 'ClientErrorAttributesOrValuesNotSupported' exception ? -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.41 5.5.8 GetJobs GetJobs(jobFilterElements:Job, ... , unsupportedElements : UnsupportedElements
CHANGING 'JobContainter' (misspelling)
i.e. ...... jobs:JobContainter, ...... -> jobs:JobContainer ^^^^^^^^^ -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.62 5.6.6 FetchNextDocumentByValue FetchNextDocumentByValue(jobURI:URI) : documentNumber:int, Boolean ...
DELETING 'Boolen' (Duplicate type definition of 'documentNumber' ?)
i.e. FetchNextDocumentByValue(jobURI:URI) : documentNumber:int, Boolean ...... -> FetchNextDocumentByValue(jobURI:URI) : documentNumber:int, ...... -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.77 7.2 Target Device Identifier
CHANGING 'see appendix (X)'
i.e. see appendix (X) -> see appendix A -------------------------------------------------------------------- P.79 7.3 Reference
CHANGING 'see appendix (X)'
i.e. see appendix (X) -> see appendix A --------------------------------------------------------------------
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