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From: Masanori ITOH (ito@src.ricoh.co.jp)
Date: Mon Aug 02 2004 - 09:06:40 EDT

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    Hi Mr. Berkema,

    I had some questions in PSI spec (July 21, 2004).
    So could you give me answers ?

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    P.57
       5.6.2 FetchNextJob
         Returns: sendJobNotifications : JobEvents
           'A collection of Job Events as defined by the JobEvents element
            in the Semantic Model [PWG5105.1] Events.xsd.'

        'FetchNextJob' is for a single Job. Because the return of this method
        'jobURI' indicates a sigle job. But the description of the return
        is 'A collection of Job Events ...' to explain that there is not a
        SINGLE job, but are plural jobs.
        I think a 'collection' does not exist. If a 'collection' exists,
        that is not a collection of job events ('events' is a plural form),
        but of job event. ('event' is a singular form.)
        (The type 'JobEvents' is defined like a collection of Job Event in
        'Events.xsd'.)

        So I think it is good 'A jobEvents element of type JobEvents as defined
        by the Semantic Model [PWG5105.1] Events.xsd' in that description.

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    P.60
       5.6.4 FetchNextDocumentByPull
         Returns: sendDocumentNotifications : DocumentEvents
           'A collection of Document Events as defined by the DocumentEvents
            element in Semantic Model [PWG5105.1] Events.xsd.'

        'FetchNextDocumentByPull' is for a single Document.
        If this single method deals with plural documents, how a document
        can be correspond to its event in a collection of document events ?
        I think a 'collection' does not exist. If a 'collection' exists,
        that is not a collection of document events ('events' is a plural form),
        but of document event. ('event' is a singular form.)
        (The type 'DocumentEvents' is defined like a collection of Document
        Event in 'Events.xsd'.)

        So I think it is good 'A DocumentEvents element of type DocumentEvents
        as defined by the Semantic Model [PWG5105.1] Events.xsd' in that
        description.

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    P.62
       5.6.6 FetchNextDocumentByValue
         Returns: sendDocumentNotifications : DocumentEvents
           'A collection of Document Events as defined by the DocumentEvents
            element in Semantic Model [PWG5105.1] Events.xsd.'

        Same as '5.6.4 FetchNextDocumentByPull' .

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    P.82
       7.4 InterfaceIdentifier

         Line 30
           <xsd:element name="InterfaceIdentifier" type="intf:InterfaceIdentifier"/>

         The first character of element name 'InterfaceIdentifier' is a small letter.
         See '5.3.3 QueryInterfaceDefinition' (P.22) or '5.3.2 QuerySupportedInterfaces'
         (P.21). ( 'QuerySupportedInterfaces' has plural form of 'interfaceIdentifier',
         'interfaceIdentifiers' .)
     

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    Some figures of method sequence example have mistakes.
    Those are in parameters or returns of methods.

       Fig. 5, 7, 8, 9, 10, 12

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    Comments ?

    Cheers,
    Masa.

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    Masanonri 'MASA' Itoh
    RICOH Co., Ltd. Software R&D Center

    Mr. Berkema, Alan C (R&D Roseville) wrote on Thu, 22 Jul 2004 14:09:37 -0700

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    All,

    Here are the files, thanks to Ira, Jerry, and Dave!

    The last call review process begins on 07/23/2004 and will end on
    08/16/2004.
    We will accept e-mail comments during this time period on the psi
    reflector.

    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ps/wd/wd-psi10-20040721.pdf (and .doc)
    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ps/wd/wd-psi10-20040721-rev.pdf (and .doc)

    Also the events Schema
    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ps/schemas/events-20040721.xsd

    Last Call Comment resolution meeting tbd at F2F?

    Thanks,
    Alan Berkema



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