Hi Ron,
Replies inline below.
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839
phone: +1-906-494-2434
email: imcdonald@sharplabs.com
-----Original Message-----
From: Bergman, Ron [mailto:Ron.Bergman@rpsa.ricoh.com]
Sent: Monday, December 13, 2004 4:28 PM
To: McDonald, Ira; pwg@pwg.org; Mike Fenelon; Ivan Pavicevic; Harry
Lewis
Subject: RE: Posted draft Printer Port Monitor MIB (10 Dec 2004)
Ira,
Its much better! Some minor comments:
1. ppmGeneralNaturalLanguage SIZE(0..63):
The actual max is currently 3. If a null string, this value
must be at least 4. I suggest 6 or 8.
<ira> This is NOT equivalent to 'prtLocalizationLanguage'
Per IPP and Semantic Model, all new PWG std interfaces MUST
support a full RFC 3066 'language tag' as follows:
"The syntax of this tag in ABNF [RFC 2234] is:
Language-Tag = Primary-subtag *( "-" Subtag )
Primary-subtag = 1*8ALPHA
Subtag = 1*8(ALPHA / DIGIT)"
For example, "en-US"
</ira>
2. ppmGeneralNumberOfPorts: Can't the DEFVAL be omitted without
an explanation?
<ira>
I really dislike the theory that explanations should be deleted
</ira>
3. ppmPortProtocolType: If the value is other(1), then it is
specified as a protocol other than a defined type. The note
should be removed.
<ira>
There is no defined value for 'unknown' in 'PrtChannelTypeTC'.
There is an actual requirement in well-written MIBs to include
DEFVALs for all possible objects (part of SMIv2 standards).
</ira>
4. ppmPortProtocoPortNumber: chIpp(42) should be removed since
the target protocols are only LPR and RAW TCP.
<ira> No - this is a PWG standard MIB that can use ANY of the
defined channel types, not just LPR or RAW. The IPP example
is appropriate (Harry Lewis suggested it!).
</ira>
5. ppmPortQueueName: The LPR queue name cannot be unknown. The
MS document originally defined the default as "LPR".
<ira>
The point is that it's unspecified, if empty. The default queue
name in RFC 1179 is certainly not "LPR".
</ira>
6. ppmPortLprByteCountEnabled: Add: "Ignored if
'ppmPortProtocolType' is not 'chLPDServer(8)."
<ira>
OK!
</ira>
Some of the notes should be moved into the future introductory
text and others should just be merged into the DESCRIPTION
clause. The 'notes:' should only be used only for information
that is not obvious to a well-informed reader and should be
used sparingly.
<ira>
No - delete the word 'Note:', but these explanations belong in
the MIB - customers and users who have compiled this MIB ONLY
see the DESCRIPTION and REFERENCE clauses in their management
tools - the outside text is lost forever - and not available,
since PWG standards are never published in plaintext.
</ira>
Ron
-----Original Message-----
From: McDonald, Ira [mailto:imcdonald@sharplabs.com]
Sent: Friday, December 10, 2004 12:29 PM
To: 'pwg@pwg.org'; 'Mike Fenelon'; Ivan Pavicevic; Bergman, Ron;
McDonald, Ira; Harry Lewis
Subject: Posted draft Printer Port Monitor MIB (10 Dec 2004)
Hi folks, Friday (10 December 2004)
Based on comments from Mike, Ivan, Ron, and Harry, I have just posted a
second draft of the PWG Printer Port Monitor MIB at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/BOFs/port/tb-portmib10-20041210.mib
(Enclosing IEEE/ISTO PWG boilerplate will written after email comments
and our review on January 12 at the PWG face-to-face in Camas, WA.)
Comments?
Cheers,
- Ira
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[change log included in MIB]
REVISION "0412100000Z" -- 10 December 2004 (v0.20)
DESCRIPTION "Second draft of PWG Printer Port Monitor MIB.
- added Ivan to editors (oversight in v0.10),
per request of Mike and Ivan;
- added IMPORT of 'PrtChannelTypeTC' from
IANA-PRINTER-MIB (first published in RFC 3805)
and changed SYNTAX of 'ppmPortProtocolType',
per request of Ron Bergman;
- renamed 'PpmTextStringTC' textual convention to
'PpmLocalizedStringTC' (for clarity);
- added 'ppmGeneralNumberOfPorts' to General group,
to align with Mike and Ivan's original draft;
- revised 'ppmPortProtocolType' to specify the IANA
Printer MIB as the authoritative source of values,
per request of Ron Bergman;
- revised 'ppmPortProtocolPortNumber' to specify
that, if zero, then the default port for the
current value of 'ppmPortProtocolType' is used,
per request of Harry Lewis;
- revised 'ppmPortIEEE1284DeviceId' to clarify more
format details and restricted characters,
per request of Mike and Ivan;
- moved 'ppmGeneralCommunityName' and renamed to
'ppmPortSnmpCommunityName' (for clarity),
to align with Mike and Ivan's original draft;
- renamed 'ppmPortStatusQueryEnabled' to
'ppmPortSnmpStatusQueryEnabled' (for clarity),
to align with Mike and Ivan's original draft;
- deleted 'ppmPortDescription' (redundant),
per request of Mike and Ivan;
- deleted 'ppmPortPrtChannelIndex' and
'ppmPortInterfaceIndex' (not necessary),
per request of Mike and Ivan."
REVISION "0411180000Z" -- 18 November 2004 (v0.10)
DESCRIPTION "First draft of PWG Printer Port Monitor MIB.
- content from Mike and Ivan's original draft and
a few proposed extensions."
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