I have two comments on this document.
1. Invalid examples in the description clause for:
icKeySubunitType The text "(e.g., print, copy, etc.)" is incorrect
for this object. Should be "(e.g., inputTray, outputBin, etc.)".
2. Unclear wording in the description clauses for:
icSheetBlackSheets:
Current:
"Black media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using only black colorant."
icSheetBlankSheets
Current:
"Blank media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') without an image."
icSheetFullColorSheets
Current:
"Full color media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using full color."
icSheetHighlightColorSheets
Current:
"Highlight color media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using a highlight color."
icMediaUsedBlackSheets
Current:
"Black sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using only black colorant."
icMediaUsedBlankSheets
Current:
"Blank sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') without an image."
icMediaUsedFullColorSheets
Current:
"Full color sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using full color."
icMediaUsedHighlightColorSheets
Current:
"Highlight color sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using a highlight color."
Ron Bergman
Ricoh Printing Systems America
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