Hi Ron,
The first is a good catch - thanks.
The rest are rewordings that attempt to tersely redefine
what a 'black media sheet' (for example) means. The
Counter MIB normatively imports these definitions from
the Counter Spec. The rewordings are possibly dangerous
and add no value (in my opinion). It is NOT the business
of the Counter MIB to redefine these terms at variance
with the Counter Spec.
My two cents,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839
phone: +1-906-494-2434
email: imcdonald@sharplabs.com
-----Original Message-----
From: Bergman, Ron [mailto:Ron.Bergman@rpsa.ricoh.com]
Sent: Friday, April 08, 2005 6:25 PM
To: wims@pwg.org
Cc: Harry Lewis (E-mail); Ira McDonald (E-mail 3)
Subject: Counter MIB Last Call Comments
I have two comments on this document.
1. Invalid examples in the description clause for:
icKeySubunitType The text "(e.g., print, copy, etc.)" is incorrect
for this object. Should be "(e.g., inputTray, outputBin, etc.)".
2. Unclear wording in the description clauses for:
icSheetBlackSheets:
Current:
"Black media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using only black colorant."
icSheetBlankSheets
Current:
"Blank media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') without an image."
icSheetFullColorSheets
Current:
"Full color media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using full color."
icSheetHighlightColorSheets
Current:
"Highlight color media sheets printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Media sheets printed by this managed service (e.g.,
'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using a highlight color."
icMediaUsedBlackSheets
Current:
"Black sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using only black colorant."
icMediaUsedBlankSheets
Current:
"Blank sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') without an image."
icMediaUsedFullColorSheets
Current:
"Full color sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using full color."
icMediaUsedHighlightColorSheets
Current:
"Highlight color sheets of this specific media printed by this
managed service (e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print')
or managed subunit (e.g., 'icSubunitType' of 'marker')."
Suggested:
"Sheets of this specific media printed by this managed service
(e.g., 'icServiceType' of 'print') or managed subunit (e.g.,
'icSubunitType' of 'marker') using a highlight color."
Ron Bergman
Ricoh Printing Systems America
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