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WIMS> Further minor Counters updates

From: Harry Lewis (harryl@us.ibm.com)
Date: Sat Jun 04 2005 - 16:51:59 EDT

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    Includes a more extensive spelling / grammar check, hopefully preventing you all from having to catch many of those.
    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/wd/lcrc-wimscount10-20050604rev.doc
    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/wd/lcrc-wimscount10-20050604.pdf
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    IBM STSM
    Chairman - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
    http://www.pwg.org
    IBM Printing Systems
    http://www.ibm.com/printers
    303-924-5337
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    WIMS meeting held June 1.
    Attendance: Landau, Lewis, McDonald, Thrasher

    Resulting updates posted

    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/wd/lcrc-wimscount10-20050603.pdf
    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/wd/lcrc-wimscount10-20050603rev.doc
    Change log constitutes minutes.

    1.        Reworded first sentence at intro to include role of Counters in production systems.

    2.        Updated figs 4/5 with arrows and better graphics to show aggregation concept.

    3.        Updated captions for figs 4/5

    4.        Reword sentence after fig 4

    5.        Changed Unknown to Other throughout

    6.        Removed inaccurate reference to Other as not part of the formal model (in paragraph following fig 4).
    7.        Clarified Modes vs States in Section 2, definitions.

    8.        Updated and aligned definitions in Section 2.2 with use of terms in Section 1.2

    9.        Various minor editorial (punctuation, sentence structure, etc)

    10.         Scanned and removed many of the uses of the word “counts” wherever the word “counters”, “measures” or “records” was more appropriate or enhanced readability.

    11.        Fixed intro to sections 4.4 (Avail) and  4.5 (Monitoring).

    12.        Added section 2.2. Definitions for Avail, Monitoring.

    13.        Removed previous instructive highlighting for items which have already been addressed.

    14.        Updated section 2.2 definitions per Ira’s note June 1

    15.        Updated reference in section 12 per Ira’s note June 1

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    Harry Lewis
    IBM STSM
    Chairman - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
    http://www.pwg.org
    IBM Printing Systems
    http://www.ibm.com/printers
    303-924-5337
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