I'll make those changes with the RFC Editor.
Tom
-----Original Message-----
From: Ron Bergman [mailto:rbergma at dpc.com]
Sent: Monday, June 28, 1999 08:40
To: Tom Hastings
Cc: jmp at pwg.org
Subject: JMP> Job MIB Editorial Changes
Tom,
I have noticed two editorial issues in the Job MIB that should be
corrected before the document is published. The document should be in
the RFC Editor's queue by now. Could you contact the RFC Editor
concerning these issues?
1. The Table of Contents is incorrect from section 8 forward. The
Table of Contents skips "8 Notices" and lists "8 Authors Addresses"
which is really section 9.
2. The "10 Change History" section should be removed. This section was
very useful information for the PWG during the development of the
MIB and was helpful for the IESG review, but it makes no sense in
the first version of an IETF document. All of the changes listed
are editorial and it is not essential to maintain this information
for those who have implemented to the original "version 1.0". (This
information will always be available in the copy of the Internet-
Draft archive on the PWG web site.) When we work on version 2.0 (or
1.1 or whatever) we will definitely need to include the differences
from version 1.0 in the new document.
Ron Bergman
Hitachi Koki Imaging Solutions