Here are my comments on the 02/12 version of the document. The bit
mapping looks good except for a couple of length errors.
I'd also like to point everyone to Step-by-Step Guides for Server 2008 NAP
over DHCP, 802.1x, IPsec, and VPN:
Brian, any idea when there will be a new draft?
David H. Whitehead
Lexmark International, Inc.
1 access -> assess
2.2 ordering -- alphabetical (?)
4.2 Message Syntax is a copy from SOH 2.2 -- either change or
attribute it as such.
220.127.116.11 must -> MUST
bits look good.
18.104.22.168 Specify HRESULT (or reference doc) (see:
Should we separate MS entries (SystemHealth-ID and ComplianceCode,
FailureCatagory) from Vendor Extensions (IDS)
22.214.171.124 HCD Configuration Flags TLV
The Length should be 12 and not 16.
This is a new term. Need to explain how these elements relate to
the defined attributes.
What is TLV Subtype? Not listed until section 6. We should move
these up and explain they are the TLV Subtypes defined by the PWG and used
in the vendor section of the SOH.
126.96.36.199 Do we want Vendor SMI code to be 3 or 4 bytes? Some places use 3,
other places use 4.
188.8.131.52. Need Subtype for Firmware Name OR use the already MS defined
Product Name? (see 184.108.40.206)
220.127.116.11 How do we (or can we) support multiple patches?
There is only on FW so they all apply to the same FW.
18.104.22.168 Lengths are wrong -- off by 4.
22.214.171.124 Note this is the same as 126.96.36.199.
188.8.131.52 This has changed to variable length ...
184.108.40.206 As has this one ...
I stopped at Conformance.
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