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<html xmlns:v="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40"> <head> <meta http-equiv=Content-Type content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"> <meta name=Generator content="Microsoft Word 11 (filtered medium)">  <style>  </style> </head> <body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple> <div class=Section1> All,<o:p></o:p> <o:p> </o:p> Comments and/or Suggestion for the Document.<o:p></o:p> <o:p> </o:p> <ol style='margin-top:0in' start=1 type=1> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>Add definitions for the following<o:p></o:p></li> <ol style='margin-top:0in' start=1 type=a> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1'>Resident Application<o:p></o:p></li> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1'>Downloadable Application<o:p></o:p></li> </ol> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>For the Attributes HCD_Firmware_Version, HCD_Downloadlable_Version, HCD_Resident_Application_Version; change the second half of the sentence from “… and can uniquely describe…” to “… and MUST uniquely describe”<o:p></o:p></li> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>Under HCD_Downloadable_Application_Name and HCD_Resident_Application_Name; move all of the content after the first sentence of each attribute to the definition section.<o:p></o:p></li> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>I do not understand the definition for the HCD_Name attribute.  Is this meant to be the ‘user-friendly name”???<o:p></o:p></li> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>There is a definition for “Applet” which seems to be distinct from “Application” but there is no associated attributes for downloadable/resident name/version/patches/enabled applets.  Should these attributes be added or should the definition of application be extended to include applets?   If the later is considered, then a simple bit-field (boolean) attribute could be added to denoted the application is an applet type.<o:p></o:p></li> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>I suggest that Conformance statements be reworded such they use one of the Conformance Terminology key words (MUST, SHALL, etc.).  In most cases, it just means changing the current key words to capitalization within the sentence.<o:p></o:p></li> <li class=MsoNormal style='color:navy;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><o:p> </o:p></li> </ol> <o:p> </o:p> <div style='border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt'> <div> <div class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'> <hr size=2 width="100%" align=center tabindex=-1> </div> From: owner-ids@pwg.org [mailto:owner-ids@pwg.org] On Behalf Of Jerry Thrasher Sent: Wednesday, September 03, 2008 7:36 AM To: ids@pwg.org Subject: IDS> Updated PWG HCD Health Assessment Attributed document<o:p></o:p> </div> <o:p> </o:p> I have integrated the action items resulting from the last F2F meeting discussion and review of the document. The updated documents are located at: ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idsattributes10-20080903.pdf ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idsattributes10-20080903_ncb.pdf ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idsattributes10-20080903.doc Jerry Thrasher Senior Engineer, WW Corporate Standards Lexmark International Inc. Ph:859-825-4056, Fax:859-232-7628 Email:thrasher(at)lexmark(dot)com<o:p></o:p> </div> </div> </body> </html>