Update just posted here:
http://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippfinishings21-20161109.docxhttp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippfinishings21-20161109.pdfhttp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippfinishings21-20161109-rev.pdfhttp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippfinishings21-20161109-rev.docx
Smith
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Smith Kennedy
Wireless Architect - Client Software - IPG-PPS
Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum / USB IF
Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
HP Inc.
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> On Nov 9, 2016, at 9:51 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hi Smith,
>> At least in IETF and ISO documents the "Changes Since" section is
> an appendix with a forward reference from section 1 Intro.
>> Cheers,
> - Ira
>>> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
> Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
> Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
> Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
> Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
> IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
> Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
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>>> On Wed, Nov 9, 2016 at 11:45 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect) <smith.kennedy at hp.com> wrote:
> I think that is a good idea as well. I'll add that and post a new release here in a few minutes. But should it be that late in the document? Wouldn't it be better if it was inserted in between the current section 3 "Requirements" and section 4 "Overview of Finishing", or the current section 4 "Overview of Finishing" and section 5 "Job Template Attributes"?
>> Smith
>>>>> On Nov 9, 2016, at 7:57 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> Hi Mike,
>>>> I like your suggestion and agree with your initial suggested content.
>>>> These "Changes Since" sections are important for new readers and
>> those who've "been away for awhile."
>>>> Cheers,
>> - Ira
>>>>>> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
>> Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
>> Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
>> Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
>> Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
>> IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
>> Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
>>http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic>>http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc>> mailto: blueroofmusic at gmail.com>> Jan-April: 579 Park Place Saline, MI 48176 734-944-0094
>> May-Dec: PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434
>>>>>> On Wed, Nov 9, 2016 at 8:29 AM, Michael Sweet <msweet at apple.com> wrote:
>> All,
>>>> It occurs to me, after looking at the current stable draft of IPP Finishings 2.1, that we don't have a high-level "Changes" section detailing the changes between published versions of PWG 5100.1 like we do for RFC2910bis and RFC2911bis, and that such a section would help our discussions at the F2F as well as providing useful context for readers once the update is published.
>>>> Proposed content:
>>>> 11. Overview of Changes
>>>> 11.1 Changes in IPP Finishings v2.1
>>>> The following changes were made for IPP Finishings v2.1:
>>>> - Added finishing enums and templates for multiple-hole punching and an engineering Z fold.
>> - Defined an extension naming convention for the "finishing-template" member attribute.
>> - Added the "media-sheets-supported" member attribute for the "finishings-col-database" and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.
>> - Added the "stitching-method" member attribute for the "finishings-col", "finishings-col-database", and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.
>> - Added the "printer-finisher-supplies" and "printer-finisher-supplies-description" attributes.
>>>> 11.2 Changes in IPP Finishings v2.0
>>>> The following changes were made for IPP Finishings v2.0:
>>>> - Moved definition of PWG 5100.3 "finishings-col" attribute to this document and added new member attributes for all finishings processes.
>> - Added finishing enums and templates for coating, lamination, triple stapling, different kinds of punching, and common folds.
>> - Added the "finishings-col-database" and "job-pages-per-set" attributes.
>> - Added the "media-size" and "media-size-name" member attributes for the "finishings-col-database" and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.
>>>> _________________________________________________________
>> Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer
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