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From: Sukert, Alan <Alan.Sukert at xerox.com>
Date: Wed, Sep 11, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Subject: Xerox has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
To: ipp at pwg.org <ipp at pwg.org>, Ira McDonald (blueroofmusic at gmail.com) <
blueroofmusic at gmail.com>, Paul Tykodi <ptykodi at tykodi.com>, Michael Sweet <
msweet at msweet.org>
Cc: Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) <smith.kennedy at hp.com>
The following are my comments against IPP System Service v1.0:
1. The [ACPI] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document.
2. The [DSP1027] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document.
3. The [IEEE1284] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document.
4. The [IEEE1621] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document.
5. The [ISO10175-1] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document.
6. The [PWG5100.1] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document. The text does reference [PWG5100.11], so I wonder if the
reference in 15.1 is incorrect.
7. The [PWG5107.2] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document. Also, the associated link for this reference in 15.1 does not
work.
8. The [STD66] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the
document.
9. For the [STD92] reference in 15.1, the link may be to the proper
document but it doesn’t track with the title in 15.1. 15.1 lists "Internet
Printing Protocol/1.1", STD 92, June 2018” but the document the link points
to has “*Internet Printing Protocol/1.1: Encoding and Transport”, is
dated January 2017 and is not labeled STD92.*
10. [ISO10646] is mentioned in Section 12 but is not listed in any of
the reference sections in 15.
11. [PWG5100.SYS] is mentioned in Section 14 but is not listed in any of
the reference sections in 15.
12. Not sure this is an issue or not, but I couldn’t reach the link for
the [REJUVENATION] reference in 15.2.
13. This one is a nit – For the [UNISECFAQ] reference in 15.2, the title
in 15.2 says “Unicode Consortium “Unicode Security FAQ”, November2016” but
the actual title in the referenced link is “Unicode Consortium “Unicode
Security Issues FAQ”, November2016”.
14. This may be OK, but in 2.4 on line 517 the
https://www.iso.org/standard/18191.html link takes you to *ISO/IEC
10175-1:1996*. Is that the document you wanted to point to here?
I checked all the references in Section 15 but didn’t check if all the
references in the body of the document were listed in Section 15; I will
try to do that later if I can get some spare time.
Alan Sukert
Product Security Specialist
Xerox Research and Development/ Product Security and Development Process
Controls
Xerox Certified Green Belt
Alan.Sukert at xerox.com| tel 585.427.1413
MS 0111-03A | 800 Phillips Road | Webster, NY 14580 USA
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