Sorry, should have brought these minor things up before.
Item in 3.1.9. It is unclear whether “she” on line 182 refers to the Client computer, Kate’s customer, or Kate. I suggest replacing with “Kate”.
Section 3.2. I have no idea what is meant in lines 185-187. It is unclear what is being referenced in STD92; that spec does not appear to identify exceptions. Indeed, it probably is my problem, but I lose the significance of stating that not submitting a job if the user does not want to submit mandatory data, and submitting a job if the user does not want to submit optional data are exceptions.
6.2 New page after 6.1 does not seem necessary
Thanks,
Bill Wagner
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