Thanks Ira! I've saved your file to incorporate it into the next revision. I'll let you know if I have any questions.
Smith
> On Dec 21, 2020, at 10:41 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hi Smith,
>> Thanks for uploading the correct clean draft to the FTP site.
>> Attached is your latest "-rev" MS Word version with all of the necessary IETF RFC references added
> (or corrected) and the US NIST FIPS references added. I also added a few informative MS Word
> comments for your use (please read them). I updated the Normative and Informative References
> sections accordingly.
>> Cheers,
> - Ira
>>> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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>>> On Mon, Dec 21, 2020 at 12:19 PM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) <smith.kennedy at hp.com <mailto:smith.kennedy at hp.com>> wrote:
> Hi Ira,
>>> On Dec 21, 2020, at 9:31 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com <mailto:blueroofmusic at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>> I downloaded the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" just now. My
>> copy of MS Word 2019 cannot open it - says it contains "unreadable" content and
>> suggests a recovery attempt - I didn't try it.
>>>> OTOH, the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029-rev.docx" does open OK
>> without warnings.
>>>> I'm not sure what version of MS Word you're using or what OS platform. But the
>> source of the eventual published version needs to be stable and readable for
>> future maintenance.
>> My local copy opens without complain on both macOS and Windows 10, but the one on the FTP site is broken. I am not sure why the upload got messed up but the SHA256 hashes of my local copy of "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" and the one on the FTP site don't match. I just pushed up a new copy and it loads as expected - try again:
>>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx>
>>>> <wd-ippepx20-20201029-rev-ira.docx>
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