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<html xmlns:o="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:st1="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40"> <head> <meta http-equiv=Content-Type content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"> <meta name=Generator content="Microsoft Word 11 (filtered medium)"> <o:SmartTagType namespaceuri="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" name="Street"/> <o:SmartTagType namespaceuri="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" name="address"/> <o:SmartTagType namespaceuri="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" name="PlaceType"/> <o:SmartTagType namespaceuri="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" name="PlaceName"/> <o:SmartTagType namespaceuri="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" name="place"/>  <style>  </style> </head> <body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple> <div class=Section1> My comments:<o:p></o:p> PZ01 - Line:264 – Remove the line marked 4 from the diagram.  The client does not ask the Template Manager Service for a new/empty template.  The new template is created based on the Job Ticket schema.<o:p></o:p> PZ02 - Line 272 – delete (see PZ01)<o:p></o:p> PZ03 -  Line 273 delete (see PZ04)<o:p></o:p> PZ04 – Line 274 change to “The remote Scan Client requests, from the user’s specified Scan Service (scanner), the associated description attribute and the range of values for each element.”<o:p></o:p> PZ05 – Line 282 change to “The Template Manager Service stores the configured Scan Job Template in its Job Template Repository (local or remote).<o:p></o:p> PZ06  - renumber diagram and processing flow.<o:p></o:p> PZ07 – Line 291-292 – delete (See PZ01) <o:p></o:p> PZ08 – Line 333 - change to “From the Local Scan Client the end user requests a list of templates”<o:p></o:p> PZ09 – Line 378 – change “supportedand” to “supported and” <o:p></o:p> PZ10 – Comment – We know when a Digital Document is created.  Does the model contain any attributes that control the deletion of the Digital Document?  I assume if we do add this feature it would only apply to Digital Documents store internal to the MFD and accessible only via the Scan Service.<o:p></o:p> PZ11 – Line 550 – This should be Pause instead of disable.  We want to temporarily interrupt the processing of scan jobs not the acceptance of new scan jobs into the queue<o:p></o:p> PZ12 – Comment – What is the difference between use case 6 and 7<o:p></o:p> PZ13 – Comment – I would like to update the model and operations based on the existing WSDL/Schema with updates based on requirements from this version of the document <o:p></o:p> <o:p> </o:p> Peter Zehler XEROX <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:PlaceName w:st="on">Xerox</st1:PlaceName> <st1:PlaceName w:st="on">Research</st1:PlaceName> <st1:PlaceType w:st="on">Center</st1:PlaceType></st1:place> Webster Email: Peter.Zehler@Xerox.com Voice: (585) 265-8755 FAX: (585) 265-7441 US Mail: Peter Zehler Xerox Corp. <st1:Street w:st="on"><st1:address w:st="on">800 Phillips Rd.</st1:address></st1:Street> M/S 128-25E Webster NY, 14580-9701 <o:p></o:p> <o:p> </o:p> </div> </body> </html>