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All, The WG Last Call was closed at the end of business yesterday. I have not received further comments since last teleconference. Here is the Last Call comment from the last teleconference, and some comments I have so far for the WG Last Call: #1. From the last teleconference - Comment: Scan Client should only interact with Scan Service. There should be a separate client interact with Scan Template Manager Service.   Resolution: We have defined a separate client called Scan Template Manager Client that interacts with Scan Template Mnager Service. The network scanning client application contains a Scan Client and optionally a Scan Template Management Client. The changes have been reflected in the update Model Semantics and Service Interface document. Below are my recommended changes that are essential after the last teleconference: #2  Abstract, IEEE document title, Introduction must be modified to reflect the content is about Use Cases & Requirements, not the model semantics and interfaces. #3  Terminology must be changed to be consistent with the changes in the model semantics and interfaces. The following terms are not referenced in this requirement document and will not be included :         - Active Job         - Image         - Job History #4  In Use Cases 1 & 2, "Scan Client" will be changed to "network scanning client application" in Use Case diagram and processing flow. In the Design Requirements, "Scan Client" will be changed to "network scanning client application" that uses "Scan Client" to request Scan Service operations and uses "Scan Template Manager Client" to request Scan Template Manager Service operations. #5  Remove "Conformance Requirements" section, or make a note that we leave this to the Model Semantics and Service Interfaces for a complete specification. #6  "PWG and IANA Registration Consideration" section - the requirements for PWG Scan service type definition and registration with IANA from service discovery use case should be reiterated and specified here. #7  Remove “Internationalization Consideration” section, or make a note that we leave this to the Model Semantics and Service Interfaces for a complete specification. Let's discuss your opinions in today's teleconference. -Nancy --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nancy Chen Solutions and Technology Oki Data 2000 Bishops Gate Blvd. Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054 Phone: (856) 222-7006 Email: nchen@okidata.com