An updated copy of the proposal by Fumio Nagasaka has been uploaded.
The PDF file has been uploaded at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/p1394/mtg092898/proposal-cmd-1a.pdf
This is proposed after reviewing new profile (Rev. 0.52). It addresses
some points in the current proposal. Thus it is also a proposal for the
1394 PWG command set.
Regards,
Greg