IPP Mail Archive: Re: IPP> IPP Internet-Draft

Re: IPP> IPP Internet-Draft

Robert Herriot (robert.herriot@Eng.Sun.COM)
Mon, 25 Nov 1996 18:39:19 -0800

Great Job Scott!

I found a few typos:

MS Word thinks that 'implementor' should be changed to 'implementer'.

in the table above line 928, it says

... is r
are returned:eturned.

The word returned is split and duplicated

A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:

For each J
position-in-list. ob URL ...

The word Job seems to have been split.

A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:

... and
andposition

An extra 'and'

A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:

change 'and end user' to 'an end user'

A couple of lines further down in the same table cell:
... inter
esponse,spersed.

Delete 'esponse'.

Above line 969 in type2Enum cell: change 'cancan' to 'can', change
'TBDbyvalues' to 'values', change 'anytimereviewed' to 'reviewed',
change 'approvaal' to 'approval'

A couple of lines further down in the next table cell:

change 'namvalues' to 'values'.

line 1071: in table cell for processing:
fix 'enginthe'. I not sure what should be here.

line 1993: change 'atttribute' to 'attribute'