1) section 2.1.4 I found the following paragraph confusing
Print jobs will also be submitted by background or batch
applications without human intervention. Any application
level
Internet printing application must support this type of
printing.
2) section 2.2.1 and 2.2.2 Should it be stated that these are not
addressed in V1.0
3) section 3.1 Should the characteristics that might be considered
when locating a printer be brought in line with the DIR document.
4) section 3.5 Is end-user notification a V1.0 requirement?
5) section 3.6 Should cancel job and modify job be lumped together?
6) section 4.3 The first bulleted item still refers to tags for
attributes and attribute values.
7)section 6 Email address corrections Tom Hastings:
hastings@cp10.es.xerox.com and Peter Zehler:
pzehler@channels.mc.xerox.com
8) Throughout scenarios replace job id = #12345 with job uri =
http://pwg.org/printer/job12345
9) Throughout scenarios adjust returns from print operations to bring
in line with MOD doc.
10) section 3.1 and Throughout scenarios remove references to
"cost".
Pete
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